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Cheshire

She exudes confidence
That appeals to every eye
Lingers a little too long
And although short
She is the perfect height in heels
That creates a muscular line
Down shapely thighs smooth
Like her laughter that vibrates
Walls cannot contain it
Catches on and lifts faces
In her direction as she leaves
Everyone in a dream that lingers
Only as a vibrant smile

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On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Marek (140) writes:

I quite enjoyed this, I love the way the title ties. :) good stuff!

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

I'm Sure Everyone Has Someone In Their Life As Such... In One Form Or Another. Bag Of Goodies. GPhD.

On Sunday June 8th, 2003, hate_doll (327) writes:

As everyone else has stated...sexy piece and amazing eyes...

On Sunday May 25th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Tight, and simply beautiful. ~ mw

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

yeah...you have pretty eyes! AMAZING POEM! i wanna read more/!

On Monday May 5th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

this reminds me of Pure Bliss. Thats the same kind of luminescant wonder that is always emitted from who I wrote it about(you know who). breathtaking. :)

On Monday May 5th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:

This does successfully create a portait in my mind - felt like I was looking at the scene in lieu of reading about it. Oh, in case I didn't say so in my other three comments - BEAUTIFUL EYES! : ) Ciao, T/S

On Monday May 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

You are so lovely... thank you

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

very nice piece,and you do have some beautiful eyes, thanks for sharing both with us

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

Hmm. me likes. Very descriptive indeed. And yes, you do have nice eyes. Sorry, I would write more, but it's friday, what can you expect?

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

hehe, "keep writing", no actually ... you should quit while your ahead ...

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

jack ass! :)

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:

yes, this does have a sultry way about it, good work ...keep writing ~CFS

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

you guys are so damn sweet!! thank you... I havent gotten comment like this since I was little, but I was ALL eyes then:) it means a lot though, really.

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, cre (507) writes:

That is sooo sexy. And I agree with Justin - lovely peepers you've got.

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

Oh WOW, this is a great descriptive piece. I thought it would be about your profile pic, but this is even better. Though you do have the most beautiful eyes. Great stuff.

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