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"Soulfreeze" by liquid_emotion

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I wanna tell a story but I don’t know how cuz I’m trapped inside this flowing hell
That ebbs and breaks and weaves my words instructing thoughts to do its work
The freedom inside restricts when it leaves and I’m left stuck in their binding weave
Someday I’ll break and cut the flow and chop this ever incessant roll
I’ll restrict the emotion that stops short of whole and halt my always liquid soul



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On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
"and halt my always liquid soul "...powerful, descriptive line...very well done!


On Saturday June 7th, 2003, Marek (140) writes:
I like the way this works with the title, I really don't think it would be the same without it, which did you write first? well, I was just wondering. :) I liked it, I am even tempted ot play with your words to see what happens, but I will refrain


On Monday May 5th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Wow. I feel like I want to rap this over a nice little beat or something. This flowed as smooth as your liquid soul. :)


On Sunday May 4th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:
very nice its like an adrenaline rush that comes to abrupt end, thanks for sharing


On Thursday May 1st, 2003, cre (507) writes:
Ohh, I like this! It would be great on your profile. It's so tumbly frantic and all trapped inside itself at the same time. Wonderful.


On Thursday May 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
hey it would be good on my profile!!! thanks:)



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