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There is no
Saving grace
From yourself
And a mirror
That screams
Obscenities
At eyes
So cold and pale
Death is not
A word
Compared to
The sicknesses
That eats at you
From the inside
Out



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On Friday January 4th, 2008, elisa (1987) writes:
looking in to see out.... self cannibalized. nicely done.


On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
intense, like boiling black oil seeping from you duodendum into your stomach, burning, aching, death sounds like a holiday.


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, MindRape (861) writes:
Awesome! intense, deep and easily relatable. Good write!


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:
Beautiful, short and sweet...straight to the point, even though the point can not be found only shadows....wonderful write! ~gothic~


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Oh, nice. Deep, dark, and an imagination sparker. I enjoyed it. :)


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Stranger (298) writes:
With a razor blades efficiency, you cut to the bone with this one.


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Nice piece. Deep and Dark.-Kefka


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:
Great job!!*Chelsie*


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
the ending caught me right through...this is great!


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
WOW, intense......that's all I can say. Good write



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