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You Left Me On The Other Side Of Love

Separated across oceans of emotion
And I don’t think you comprehend
Where love begins and energy ends
Within a life you never understood
Barely touching the surface outside
Endless green that held so much more
And continues to grow unattended
By your forgotten and distant eyes
So blue that I can’t look inside them
Afraid of what is hidden underneath
And not wanting to pour over the rim
That holds in a life of contemplation
And thoughts you never asked to see
Real rawness and beauty of an ocean
That separates the colors and breaks
Upon ever distant shores of love
Now swept clean by tides and time
And unspoken words that never swam
Through blues and greens of surface
Conversation and forgotten memories

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On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, An Expired Member (3) writes:

All your stuff is so beautiful... It's a sort of soft sadness, but it seems to bring forth real emotion. Thanks~

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

you drip down the shower walls of my heart and soul... i relate to the structure of your words like no one else on this site... emotion... you are liquid emotion.

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

*sigh*

On Monday April 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

That was absolutely beautiful. Now I want to cry...

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

Once again you demonstrate your mastery of imagery well. :)

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

this is simply beautiful ... and there's at least a dictionary full of other discriptions i could of used .... awsome write poet

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Stranger (298) writes:

The words you write seem to make the saddest things beautiful.

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Deep and Saddening. You amaze me with your writes of love. You wield the idea well.-Kefka

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

I agree with Justin. Liquid, even though I hate you, you write damn good. :)

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

ha!

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

hmm a whole turbulent sea swept you to one side....this is thoughtful and insightful...seems like you painted a beautiful dark picture with words!

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

This goes deeper than sadness, there is a tinge of regret in it. I't beautifully written and a wonderful read though

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Yes Sagey, yes there is.

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