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Streaks of white light and pink
Against the blue of your eyes
And I don’t remember your voice
Or recall whether or not I love you
I pulled away from your world
And then forgot to tell you why
Left in the emptiness I am filling
Dumping out and filling again
Nothing feels right in my thoughts
And still I cannot bring myself
To let you deep inside a secret
That won’t whisper through
Plastic letters and dim lit screens
So I slip away quietly unnoticed
And pretend you left me here




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On Friday April 25th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:
All the above, S.


On Thursday April 24th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
brilliantly done.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
a nerve ending poked .. nicely done


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
well, that doesn't sound soothing:)


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, MindRape (861) writes:
WOW! i love this too good write liquid


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
I love this.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
damn right!


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
This is remarkably written, memories in the corners of my mind are brought back. Well done my friend


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
Very nice. Of course I love all of your work liquid. You never cease to make me smile. Or sad, whichever way the poem is written, or um....you get what I mean.



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