DarkPoetry -|- liquid_emotion -|- Through The Obvious

Darkness
Renders me speechless
Eternally silent
Alone in my
Memories

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On Thursday April 24th, 2003, cre (507) writes:

Excellent .. yer such a clever thing :P I enjoyed this one, another great job.

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

The DREAMS are wonderful. well expressed

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

This poem is nice. I've always loved to recall DREAMs and analyze them. You did so with clever art. :)

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

ok pretend this is a riddle and if noone figures out im gonna die!!

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

i NEVER get those goddam accronym riddle poems. that's ok though. nice write. have you read dave's tic tac poem?

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

I will now.

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

smoke, invisible but ever so palpable hovers above my head, swirling with all the thoughts and forgotten memories a child of twenty should or shouldn't have... stoned with the lights out.

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I think this poem is amazing! Even thought it's short, it uses powerful images to paint pictures. It's just lush :)

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

well, it's short for good reason... through the obvious :) thank you so very much.

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