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a rain drop falls pounding into the water
the waves left behind go undetected
underneath surfacing treasures untold chaos
clouds turn to coal and thunders triumph

the moth flies unharmed

wind spears a piercing venom into your face
take away your breath
debree sprays aomngst the once so calm lands
take away your sight

-take a chance-
-as horns blow-
-now you dance-
-as skies glow-
-in it's light-
-amazing scene-
-now your life-
-on the screen-

erruptions echo mind blowing tantrum acts
take away control
fury undergoes black flame torcherd mechanisms
take away suffering

your last thought
was not caught
only your eyes
of great suprise

''''''--pass through wind------''

but it is here that the tiny thimble
does not move
goes unharmed
un-noticed as the first drop of rain
here for stay
in me forever
your large buildings have now crumbled
your only thought of how the thunder rumbled
to crash down on top of all who is large
all who pretends that they are in charge

it's not over
never will it die
rise again
to make you cry

join me and my tiny thimble
we'll carry on like a ringing cymbal
to the end in the ages of the goth
just the few of us.. and that little moth




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On Saturday May 8th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
vivid descriptions. meaningful. great write!


On Friday March 12th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
The words and meaning just mixed in an amazing way ... tasteful and strong just at the right point.


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Extremely imaginative, very original. It has a graceful air to it. A lovely piece. ~L


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (374) writes:
What grand images you conjure, 4th stanza is a awesome. +T.P.U+


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
This is rather touching, and i can agree with you here. Damnit .. now i want to topple a small government just to see if i am capable. Nicely done. [D&A]


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
images and feelings all beautifully woven together.. nice job -lime


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:
very creative , extremely polished ... liked this a lot .. funguy



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