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This is a more realistic view of how sombody might read a sucide note...

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On Friday April 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:
unlike my comment, your piece is so original and true. i like it.


On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Two thumbs up for originality on this one. I knew I'd like it even before I started reading. I think there are many way to interpret this piece, and I have to side with Twilight's perspective on this one.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
yeah, thats pretty true but i think a suicide note is very personal and what it contains are a persons reason may they be petty or justified to want to take there own life.....well its complicated...~lydia~


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
Makes sense, nice thinking. Tiger


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:
nice perception.nice write.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:
far out.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
I agree those are the words that actually make sense in a panic when you read a suicide note of someone you know and care about..why and where and everything else doesn't register.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
they pad everything with these pointless words. btu when ti comes down to it that is really what the note says. get to the point you suicidal morons. very creative frost.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, IceDragoness (250) writes:
Hey.. suicidial folks are entitled to a last run on their poetic license before they do themselves in, as far as the piece goes.. frighteningly accurate ~Dawn


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
true, true.. :O) I like it....



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