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meaningless proceedures weigh heavily
constructive dreaming living amongst
persuation as turning to look behind
fog and gloom no air ahead
to take a turn, not go further in
the motion that lurks here is too little
pulled back by that dream tugging so hard
to follow a dream not in my own yard
the fait of turning makes one think
could it of happened?
would it have been?
my dream kept me caged for oh so long
but to achieve what is started now
seems so hard to see
that path so full of fog
'futures' and 'one days' holding me back
from plumating towards that brave new door
behind the door, does it make sense
to turn away from everything I was
beginnings untold lie for me there
perhaps to be torn away from dreams can be good
perhaps I should open that door
is what I believe here worth this path?
or is it facing an unthinkable rath
that turn to the new door looks oh so good
but once again my life becomes ajard
pulled back by that dream tugging so hard
the turning point not far ahead
the decision needs to come quick
but it's not enough time
what if dreams along my path come sooner and large
regret and remorse would plague me to death
but there it is, so shiny and new
the real quesiton is, which way is true....




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On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
"my dream kept me caged for oh so long " YES!!!! that is the line i have been waititng for!! thank you!! ~Lydia~


On Thursday November 13th, 2003, Storm (184) writes:
True, the recemblance is strucking. Though you have to chose... I knew what to do.. But it is there! Splendid poem. So which way was true?


On Monday February 2nd, 2004, frost bite (48) writes:
venturing into new worlds and doors is good I have found, however my path has been layed before me and straying from it would have caused to much...suck


On Thursday November 13th, 2003, frost bite (48) writes:
i do not know... i am still very much in that process.. yer lucky to have chosen


On Tuesday November 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:
what your saying in this one touches home for me. very sincere


On Tuesday November 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (33) writes:
Nice write..I like this one alot...my fave from you so far :)


On Tuesday November 11th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Marvelous write, keep this up and you'll be going places...



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