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Psycho, Analyst

A) muse, sing

you stupid creature,
or I shall kick you
senseless
and sense less
until the dance is spun like
spiderwebs screaming like
mornings in granite like
torn floral kitchens like
silver perversions like
you should be spinning like
all that I cannot
like

B) wilder meant

Wake up.
Look what's happened.
You made me sink under the
beat (N),
again;

C) sick

and drowning

D) purr.

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On Friday September 15th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:

I agree, VERY cleverly crafted. I enjoyed peering into this Alice and Wonderlandesque depiction. Ciao, T/S

On Thursday September 7th, 2006, flying_fox (764) writes:

Wow... utterly original and cleverly crafted. I read this three times and I still don't know what to say. Loved it.

On Friday September 1st, 2006, Metal Lullaby (62) writes:

brilliant

On Saturday August 19th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (446) writes:

*smiles* I'm afraid in my absence i've not really gotten any better at this whole commeting thing. But I think this is wonderful and i've really missed reading your work. Thank you.. this is excellent.. *applauds*

On Saturday August 19th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

a pyschotic anaylsis....watch you don't terorise the coach...head thumping poetry, original context...Freud sweats in his Oedipus complex..and all I can think is: 'Jocasta was a whore...damn!!!'

On Saturday August 19th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

E) N,chan.ting! "A) muse, sing..." Very E(E)xcellently crafted... I like the cummings style... F)abulous. You are a muse, and your poetry sings... Bravo!!!

On Saturday August 19th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

p,s: Love the title; very clever.

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:

interesting subject.. the rhythm kicks ass.

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Jay Jii (330) writes:

Catlady, your purr is ferocious. 3:D

On Friday August 18th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1021) writes:

You are a talent to be reckoned with m'dear! WOW purr! I love the blended wording, double meanings! This is definitely a fave! You're awesome love. Julia~

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Morbid_insanity (117) writes:

Its magnifecent its speaks to me. Nice ~Josh

On Friday August 18th, 2006, blue (1702) writes:

damn damn damn!

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:

*grins* this was completly perfect. i love the whole tone of this, and the first stanza totally spun me in circles. wonderful, wonderful write.

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:

you know, you should really post more :)

On Friday August 18th, 2006, Jay Jii (330) writes:

I'll second that.

On Friday August 18th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:

brilliant.

On Friday August 18th, 2006, blue (1702) writes:

o.O)) I.. yeah. You rock lady! ~b

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