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i found myself today
becoming poetry;
paperthin and stupidly fragile
too many scribbles
too many mistakes,
and an overworked line
still dripping cliche,
consistently failing to make sense

but i think my basic idea
is a good one
and sometimes there is no scribbling,
just certainty,
and i like that little verse
at the heart of it all
and i hope you do too
and maybe you'll even love it,
reread it over&over
tattoo it somewhere inside
and treasure it,
even though it's only
a neverending draft

and maybe you'll wait for me
to get that final stanza right,
find the dance of inspiration
wordshaping me perfect
and immortal;

but if i do not,
i hope that little verse
at the heart of it all -
surrounded by error
and another cliche -
stays with you regardless,
incomplete yet
adored.

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On Wednesday July 16th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2425) writes:
exquisite! They bared soul, the flawed being in the flawed poem - gah - who cares for perfection! What we need now is tattoos of poems, reminders of heart and soul; life and living - not what I expected but the resonance of this was resounding....brilliant


On Saturday March 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1646) writes:
=D..Words fail me :)


On Friday January 5th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:
theres nothing i can say that hasnt already been said, just know that i adore this ~kristy


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (160) writes:
~undescribable...i just want to keep this poem for myself...haha how selfish of me...but really this is just one cool write...unlike all your other works this seems to be simple yet still packing that poetic punch...very cool


On Monday September 18th, 2006, Carmina Gitana (114) writes:
I love this, like everyone else. So simple, and straightforward and personal, nothing shocking, nothing overblown - just measured, dignified and beautiful. Thank you, I needed this today.


On Tuesday September 5th, 2006, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
great portrayel of the process, it's often hard to make the work live up to the idea or mean as much as "that little verse at the heart of it all"


On Sunday August 13th, 2006, blue (1758) writes:
haha! ahhh, I love this. Love it. You brought a big ole smile to me face Ms. Purr. Indeed. *you get a cookie* =) ~b


On Saturday August 12th, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:
"wordshaping me perfect and immortal". God i've missed you. -l-


On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, OLd SouL (838) writes:
You are adored... every little flaw and perfection... You could write a wanted ad and it would be splendiferous. :::OLd


On Saturday June 24th, 2006, Collective Amnesia (248) writes:
ah the cleverness is just amazing, just gorgeous, you are talented beyond belief ~Tamara


On Saturday June 24th, 2006, Jay Jii (336) writes:
The poem that that we are forever revising. You have a true gift for the metaphor. This is a joy...


On Friday June 23rd, 2006, NikesRain (1503) writes:
wonderfully put and posed.. and yet it's more than just a little verse for you are in it and in keeping that close one knows a touch of wonder of your beauty and talent and lovely spirit.. a priceless gift... well done indeed..


On Friday June 23rd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"paperthin and stupidly fragile" Beautiful: a perfect verse. You have giving life to these little words, these playful scribbles... and they dance like so many spiderglyphs on waterdrops... well done.


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
oh, this is simply fantastic, from the title to the conclusion..i loved all of this, it's too clever. "and i like that little verse at the heart of it all and i hope you do too" this made me smile. great write :)


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:
you are just too adorable for words. Everything about you - not just your essence or that 'little verse' - is wonderful. I love thsi piece and the notion of 'love me with my faults' - or perhaps despite of them - is noble and true. love you more than I co


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:
uld ever say. *mwah mwah mwah*


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, dying angel (1352) writes:
what a gorgeous peice. i liked this more than you can imagine. it's like your praying for something you already have but you just havent realized it yet.


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, Audrey-Gisele (13) writes:
"wordshaping me perfect"--great write! It reminds me a little of an Erich Fromm quote: "The whole life of the individual is nothing but the process of giving birth to himself; indeed, we should be fully born when we die." ;)


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, anth (1610) writes:
i never know what my poems will be about, but i admire in you the feeling i get that you have an idea somewhere during the day, and know exactly what your going to write,


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, anth (1610) writes:
like you had such a good idea and then you worded it so flawlessly, another remarkable creation from you


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1058) writes:
As it does at this very moment dear heart! I adore this and you hun! Words fail me here... becoming poetry? No you are poetry! *hugs* Julia~


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, ShardsofSilence (332) writes:
I must say, I really enjoyed reading this :) Your words were sincere and the concept was brilliantly written out with your beauty


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, AniDayz (1284) writes:
. . . beautiful . . . the title drew me in, and you kept me going. . .


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:
always a pleasure reading... NAY, expiriencing your posts



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