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sleep
war
king:

zzzzzzzzzzzzzi amzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzi am -zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzhearzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzam i heard?zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzi amzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherdzzzzzzzzzzzzz
all crawl juxtajust/a/pose.d
inn fight awe flightening
imp o' light as darknests
re[de[ceptacles ova the whirled
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe arezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzherezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe are -zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzhearzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzare we heard?zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe arezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherdzzzzzzzzzzzzz

s.o.s
dit dit dit
da da da
dit dit dit
da da da
dit dit dit
dada
da
da-da-da-dah!
bang.

No act shun;
scream bloody worder.

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On Tuesday April 17th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

what an art attack......you are such an original teaser....this was a neo Dada epileptic word epiloque....damn damn crazy with incredibly inducing imagery through the clever wordplay, sprung ryhtmic staccato attack...f**kin wicked!!

On Thursday June 1st, 2006, Zen (629) writes:

almost makes me wanna think...almost

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:

a manic read, brilliance in deliberate/organisational formatting, the way it rolls and drums.. creatively masterful.

On Friday January 6th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

Excellent.

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:

grati-satis-faction... loop-line-lies licking my eyes... balls pop and roll... the floor is dirty now i see the truth... sleeeep... sleeeeeeep my precious herd of sheeeep... sheeeeeep...

On Monday January 2nd, 2006, suicideseason (2145) writes:

Your style...simply to die for...*grins*...noone crosses their t's and dots their poetic i's like you do.This re-affirms my theory that you are from another planet.

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, purr_verse (1437) writes:

>:D hehehe! Ahem. *pokes antennae back in*

On Sunday December 25th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

Wow the format you used here was killer. I love the lines inside the z's and the last two lines were perfect. Very killer. ~Ship!

On Saturday December 24th, 2005, Northstar (455) writes:

you are defnitely masterful, yet again...surprise surprise *wink*

On Saturday December 24th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"all crawl juxtajust/a/pose.d" Quite creatively structure-spun. The dada sound style works w/ a perfect bang; well done. I like the buzzing undertone feel/sound...zzz...

On Friday December 23rd, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

*structurally.. i'm not even sure that a word, but hey. I'll at least make a proper attempt to spell it right, ha

On Friday December 23rd, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

'No act shun; scream bloody worder.'.. I have nothing interesting to say, as ever.. but I thought i'd let you know that I enjoyed this rather a lot. Thank you for sharing it.

On Friday December 23rd, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

aah, I love poetry ike this. It's strucurally wonderful. I so wish I could write this way.. I really think it's fantastic. I have much respect for those who can :)

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, saintedmad (1154) writes:

mmmm. . .this felt like poprocks in my head; such a snip.snap write and i concur~ it did make loverly sense in some jabberwockish, brackish way... :}

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:

"we are herd" "No act shun" - this piece actually makes purr_fect sense to me. The format of the text reminds me of a candle-holder with the words "sleep war king:" being a flame. Very enjoyable. A pleasure to read, as always.

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, blue (1751) writes:

=) sleep war king? damn. what a way to start a write!! this was fantastic in a sensical/non-sensical way (sensical? is that even a word?) anyway, you rock!! as per usual ;) ~b

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:

dada piece...obviously. >:)

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