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Tiny feline explosion
in your haphazard ebon coat,
yellow fire-eyes gleaming
with the spirit of the young;

you hardly seem to notice
the steel bars on your cage.

Six weeks old and too small
to back up the playthreats you offer
with a hiss more like a breath
and a sideways leap of challenge,
you are for a moment
the kittenqueen of the jungle;

or you would be
if nature was beneath your paws
instead of plastic.

The pound is no place for a panther,
even a domestic one
of no determined pedigree.

You always greet the staff with a purr
and a rub
and a joyous love of dinnertime,
and you greet the vet the same way;

but he does not bring you dinner.
he cannot find you a new home.
he carries you to the surgery
gently
and brings you narcotic foreversleep
through a needle almost as long as
your undersized leg.


Nothing is as still
as a dead kitten


and the distant hum of the incinerator
roars tonight.






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On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"Nothing is as still as a dead kitten" Powerful (Still); heartbreaking, beautiful...


On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
you've written so many beautiful things purr, i don't know why this one that breaks me every time & calls me back is my favorite; perhaps because i don't want to just push it in the back of my mind even if it hurts so. ~pf


On Wednesday May 31st, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:
just read this again and again it has brought me undone. magical words bringing most beautiful images so that the pain which follows takes my breath away...


On Wednesday March 22nd, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
omg .. when I clicked on this I never expected this, not in a million years .. kittenqueen .. I was free-falling through the imagery *stunning*, and somewhere in the last few lines, I forgot how to fly :( .. I'm devastated ~V


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:
so honestly devastating...-l-


On Sunday July 31st, 2005, flying_fox (769) writes:
too emotional for typing. *clutches all furchildren to her heart*


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, capt_funguy (1000) writes:
the machine , the devouring machine .. to just think of the joy he would have had , and been .. the scampering , the clawing , the mad half hours ... millions upon millions of unpurred tremmors -


On Friday July 22nd, 2005, capt_funguy (1000) writes:
i know all the logic , i know all the realities , but it's a sin all the same ... ensuring for always that there will never be enough beauty in this world ... loved this ... funguy


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, manywalks (951) writes:
Oh, this tears at the heart. Humane deaths my ass, superb work here, as usual.


On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Wow. That is so... sad... yet so angry. I really like it.


On Monday July 18th, 2005, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
This is pretty chilly. I feel I am sometimes lost. This is really a great piece. You really do need to stop by more. Wonderful as always!


On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:
Oh god, You had me smiling until the end lines.. damn, talk about dropping out the bottom! You've done your job here evoking emotion purr! ~b


On Tuesday July 5th, 2005, Valentine (509) writes:
You have such a talent, dear. This seems destined to become a rare classic. You find a way of presenting your streaming thoughts, ideas, with such definition. Everything you write seems to evoke something within me..This piece is simply beyond compare


On Monday June 27th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
"if nature was beneath your paws instead of plastic" Exquisite. Such sad beauty. I think I'll go adopt the entire pound.


On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Liz (407) writes:
Awww


On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Liz (407) writes:
"foreversleep, kittenqueen" I like the fake compound words. Adds to the cute-factor.


On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Sharon Rose (642) writes:
aye..and this is why I do not give my foundlings to the pound..I find them new homes all on my own...it's sickening what we consider humane...


On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
heart-wrenching imagery and expression of things too painful to think about so we push them to the backs of our mind. you broke my heart with exquisite semantics.


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"and brings you narcotic foreversleep through a needle..." This movement is music in words. "Nothing is as still as a dead kitten." Painfully beautiful. "if nature was beneath your paws instead of plastic." This possesses the visual echoes of Ted Hughe


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
...Ted Hughes, "When I saw little rabbits with their heads crushed on roads/I knew I rode the wheel of the galaxy." From The Scream. Your words are a creative gift in this poetic galaxy; thank you, even if this one brings tears like screams...cinders fall


On Monday June 20th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
...cinders falling. And a cinder has been born, like 'tiny feline explosion', in Mephistopheles...'yellow fire-eyes gleaming.' Even if he always greets you w/ a gurgle & a purr... I'd fav this one, but am limited (sorry).


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, stitch (78) writes:
its thoughts like these that lead me to become the crazy cat lady (must save the kitties!) :P


On Wednesday July 6th, 2005, purr_verse (1438) writes:
I could have saved this kitten, but didn't. I thought somebody else would take her for sure. 16 years ago, when I volunteer-worked at the RSPCA. That was it - I had to leave before I DID become the Crazy Cat Lady and take every cat home with me. I still t


On Wednesday July 6th, 2005, purr_verse (1438) writes:
think about her. (and the staff really did name her Cinders). I came back the next week and adopted a cat, who I still have. He turns 17 in November. :)


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, TheProphetUntold (348) writes:
Unnerving. Seems like one of those things that no one would ever want to think about, let alone write. Sick and brilliant. +T.P.U+


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (860) writes:
fuck....*searches for a cat to hold.*


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, birdwell (177) writes:
that has to be the most haunting thing i've ever read, i going to go hold my cat now ~db~


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:
Oh my this was pull no punches night it looks like. Very cut throat "he carries you to the surgery gently and brings you narcotic foreversleep" Especially dug those lines. Heh cool. -Ship


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Solace (1425) writes:
Harsh and unyielding...like ice...but with fire...loss is loss call it whatever name you will



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