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"Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse

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I'd never seen another quite like you -
beautiful unfamiliar creature
in your sixlegged frenzied grasstop crawl,
sunshards reflecting ephemeral prisms
from the back of your iridescent
chitinous wingmarvels
painted wild iridescent blues, greens, violets;
In my wondercaught crouch before you
I rest my hand upon the ground
so that you may crawl across me
and I can feel your tickling motion,
bringing me closer to an alien delight
and the curious gentle pleasure
of meeting something new
and enriching.

My neighbour steps outside a moment,
notices us.
Since I do not know your name,
I ask if
perhaps
he does.

"It's a native wasp," he tells me,

and in that reflexive, cruel instant,
with a flick and a twitch
and a fearsharpened deliberate motion
fuelled by memory of past pains,
i crush you

before you can hurt me.

---

Oh, but I did not forget you -
you were so very beautiful -
and later


too much later


I learnt that the magical little Blue Flower Wasp
does not sting.

---





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On Tuesday December 18th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (256) writes:
oh shoot!!! this hurts..


On Sunday January 28th, 2007, zanewill (117) writes:
WOW!! and what an allegory it is!! Absolutely stunning imagery & perfectly timed!! Write on!!***


On Monday February 13th, 2006, ApathysKiss (471) writes:
*jaw drop* so devastating because it is sooo relatable... =( i bear this on my cold shoulder...by far my most favourite of yours, incising and meticulously flattened on the grass as something


On Monday February 13th, 2006, ApathysKiss (471) writes:
i sidestep to avoid ever feeling...absolutely much respect. -=ak=-


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
by far the greatest allegory i have ever read. so much detail and meaning. i love it all..."i crush you before you can hurt me" priceless


On Monday May 16th, 2005, anth (1621) writes:
in my wondercaught crouch before you, returning to this again today that line jumps out at me the most, this work, forever splendid, a classic


On Monday May 9th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
wonderfully worded and so relevant to life. quite possibly one of the most creative pieces i have ever read.


On Sunday April 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (10) writes:
Regret is such a secret human emotion. we feel it more than we see it in others as it is a weakness. A weakness of failure. However you expressed it in such an honest an beautiful way. This was great!


On Sunday April 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (10) writes:
awwwwww - wow it's so nice to hear something of such different nature - Yet man! This relates to so much in the real world - I don't even have to spell out what. So beautiful - Soooooo much images pouring out. I had to slow down while i was reading it


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, NikesRain (1512) writes:
shining imagery and a lovely whimsical feel in this, and the ending just provokes your mind to skip from reverie into more serious contemplation. ahh that fear can over ride such a light moment..wonderful


On Monday March 14th, 2005, SilentStalker (1328) writes:
...not too many things amaze me quite like this did; I think I'm at a loss for words...


On Sunday March 13th, 2005, stormtalk (915) writes:
MURDERESS!


On Friday March 11th, 2005, island warrior (306) writes:
A very enjoyable read, "In my wondercaught crouch before you" I love that line.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (75) writes:
An ending that rocks the reader into an almost twisted silence. This poems contains some of the most creative words I've ever seen used in a piece. This is reflective and hauntingly. Welcome to my bookmarks. I can't wait to read more.


On Thursday March 3rd, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:
I am humbled by how you can turn regret into something as beautiful as this ... ~L


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, urbanhumility (1325) writes:
so much can be imbued here......simply wise and intelligent.......flawless one might say..............urban


On Monday February 21st, 2005, Solace (1420) writes:
*smiles* now that, that was a most beautiful allegory and one that i am thankful for reading...truly few can ever create something so awe inspiring and understandable...but you have done it with eloquence...wunderbar!


On Monday February 21st, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (344) writes:
that wasn't very nice...lol..poor wasp...-l-


On Friday February 18th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (115) writes:
God this is good. I love the slow, languid pace of the beginning, the suddenness of the denouement and the shift back to slowness and regret. Beautifully done.


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Delilah (140) writes:
Completely awesome work, great twist, I didn't see it coming...~Delilah~


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, Zophiel (356) writes:
creepy crawlies give me the creepy crawlies . . . seriously though a very eloquent and relaxing read


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) writes:
quite a master-piece you have here. Like the twist. "sunshards reflecting ephemeral prisms". wonderful.


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, flying_fox (801) writes:
oh natty... this just makes me cry. I was very moved by "and in that reflexive, cruel instant".. perhaps not the most melodious line in the piece, but the one which rang truest to me. Terrific title.


On Sunday February 13th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (502) writes:
this was so beautifully sad. "i crush you before you can hurt me" that line floored me. amazing as ever purr! ~sex~


On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
"sunshards reflecting ephemeral prisms" Splen(purr)id, in the likeness of DH Lawrence. I luv the color/texture which tickles motion like an 'alien delight'. "chitinous wingmarvels" This Scolia soror; such a sadly , yet beautiful moment. Feels like a pain


On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
...ting! well splashed (no susurrant pun). Well done, 'with a flick and a twitch.' Brightly iridescent...you are a talent.


On Friday February 11th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
Each one of your writes that I read reminds me of an excerpt from a glorious adventure tale. Hmm maybe it's just me, either way I love _every_ minute of each. Wonderful work:) ~Ryan


On Friday February 11th, 2005, frozen (756) writes:
such sweet simplicity and such perfectly written beauty, Truly gorgeous writing


On Friday February 11th, 2005, anth (1621) writes:
utterly perfect, in every way, written as only you could, another of your poems that i find ill be able to know off by heart, so many things shine through this


On Friday February 11th, 2005, Lotophagi (459) writes:
awww, that's so beautiful, and sad..... the most amazing imagery, the opening stanza is delicious, moorish, but oh, then it hurts - I felt like a child instinctively acting and then the remorse..... oh you paint a brilliant masterpiece. Thank you.


On Friday February 11th, 2005, birdwell (181) writes:
that has to be the most radical roller-coaster i've ever been on; super high, crushing low, and then a hurling twist, your amazing ~db~


On Friday February 11th, 2005, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
You've really outdone yourself.


On Friday February 11th, 2005, capt_funguy (1006) writes:
so sad ... the temp pain of a stinger seems preferable to the lasting pain mistakes like this bring ... just a beautiful piece , a simplest tragedy... funguy


On Friday February 11th, 2005, stitch (79) writes:
A beautiful tragedy; spoken as only you know how: through the eyes of innocence shaded by demise. Thank you for this prismatic view. :)


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Jay Jii (337) writes:
It's great to have a new work from you. I love this. Poignant and eloquently expressed.


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Michelle Xiao (518) writes:
A fantastic allegory of trust, it's too smart!


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
I loved the choice of words "fearsharpened deliberate motion" followed by "fuelled by memory of past pains, i crush you" It beautifully depicts a primal imbedded reaction that results in a deliberate injury, that in hindsight was unnecessary.


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
we all fear falling prey, thus we inadvertantly become the destroyer of


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Lynaes (1148) writes:
"and a fearsharpened deliberate motion fuelled by memory of past pains, i crush you before you can hurt me" I love that part.. I love all of it.


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Beautifully unique and captivating purr, and I agree with ardnek. I love the way you express yourself through writing.. so much wisdom goes into your words. Very nicely done. :)


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, ardneK (102) writes:
ouch, I like the underlying meaning behind this, nicely done - >|



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