deeper than ... wordless

~ purr_verse ~

stop/start in.conclusion
this passion distorts me
I fall into splendourhalls time inside time
this magic profusion
this hyperreality
drowns all my words in your reign so divine

All so unexpected
My truth I thought fiction
so soulshot with marvels I'm honoured in dream
my mythos perfected
my liege, my addiction
What language does justice to worlds so supreme?

EndLess and enraptured
your beautiful artlands
meltcolour my psyche with physical heat
in majesty captured
in gods of the heart, and
no phrase I could conjure will ever compete

with these silverblue visions
This Eden moon rising
These deja viewed phantasmaglories I've seen
in.verse and in.scission
These heartstars colliding:
unbound
and wildperfect
in this
bent machine.

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May 25th, 2009

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On Thursday, May 28, 2009, lovechild (43) wrote:

i love your wordflow and i can catch the drift of its undertow pulling me forward and back like i'm being rocked to some eerie lost lullaby...
On Tuesday, August 7, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1562) wrote:

I've read this a million times. I am in love with your art
A former member wrote: i'm aposlutely raped and strangled by this one
On Thursday, June 7, 2007, thelostmessenger (151) wrote:

i echo everyone thats said something below. nice! the play on words, the speeclessness you get after reading this... true perfection. great job. *messenger
On Monday, April 30, 2007, Bella Butchery (949) wrote:

p.e.r.f.e.c.t.i.o.n...... wow, i am awe struck.
On Saturday, April 21, 2007, asphyxia (61) wrote:

I decided I must come check your work out since you commented on mine... looked at your top ten to get to this. Nice to meet you, Natalie, who speaks wonders. I love how you conjoined some words. It was a nice playful touch to an intense poem.
On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Winter Born (205) wrote:

These deja viewed phantasmaglories I've seen in.verse and in.scission I love the play with words... I will have to read the rest of your work now...
On Friday, March 16, 2007, carlosjackal (1803) wrote:

Any poem that can soulsear Jon so deeply ah got to be a classic :) This knocked me senseless with adrenaline-rush glee..Bloomin' fantastic!
On Friday, March 16, 2007, carlosjackal (1803) wrote:

*has
On Monday, November 13, 2006, Instant Insanity (666) wrote:

I loved the third Stanza in this piece. Do you know how you can read something and get a completely different approach on the subject. I think thats how I felt in this poem. Nicely written ][ ][
On Monday, May 1, 2006, Ainsof (2118) wrote:

*no phrase I could conjure will ever compete* wow... but I can meditate on these lines and feel a serenity in the face of chaos that is noble and timeless
On Monday, February 13, 2006, ApathysKiss (426) wrote:

mindblowing perfection/divinity/surreal and yet awash in abysmal devotion...an awe-inspiring apotheosis...no wonder this is number 1 on your top 10 =). -=ak=-
On Wednesday, November 9, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (333) wrote:

mmmm words sweet as dark chocolate, poetic dessert to be savored. as always purr, your work amazes me. beautiful write. simply delicious language...i can't say enough
On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, abattoir (134) wrote:

I agree with 29 letters. this piece was captivating...uniquely written. beautifully sang.
On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (114) wrote:

wow. from start to finish i was completely enraptured! lovely!
On Thursday, February 17, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

powerful, very nice flow and...favs.
On Monday, January 31, 2005, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

your words illustrate such beauty...this is powerful and captivating and particularly meaningful to me. **talented** and exceptionally done. you've grasped my heart in its entirety.
On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, stormtalk (821) wrote:

Awww, you mentioned my name in your wedding vows! ::blushes:: I'm touched. :D
On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Sin (1412) wrote:

this was purrfection set upon a page..the whole second stanza was just amazing..it made my heart flutter and brought a smile to my face just to read it..absolutely lovely ~kristy
A former member wrote: I love your choice of words on every poem and this ones sing-along type of feel. You are one of the people that make this site what it is, great write, I envy you.