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*deeper than ... wordless*

stop/start in.conclusion
this passion distorts me
I fall into splendourhalls time inside time
this magic profusion
this hyperreality
drowns all my words in your reign so divine

All so unexpected
My truth I thought fiction
so soulshot with marvels I'm honoured in dream
my mythos perfected
my liege, my addiction
What language does justice to worlds so supreme?

EndLess and enraptured
your beautiful artlands
meltcolour my psyche with physical heat
in majesty captured
in gods of the heart, and
no phrase I could conjure will ever compete

with these silverblue visions
This Eden moon rising
These deja viewed phantasmaglories I've seen
in.verse and in.scission
These heartstars colliding:
unbound
and wildperfect
in this
bent machine.

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On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1859) writes:

I've read this a million times. I am in love with your art

On Thursday July 5th, 2007, An Expired Member (16) writes:

i'm aposlutely raped and strangled by this one

On Thursday June 7th, 2007, me_the_messenger (172) writes:

i echo everyone thats said something below. nice! the play on words, the speeclessness you get after reading this... true perfection. great job. *messenger

On Monday April 30th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1166) writes:

p.e.r.f.e.c.t.i.o.n...... wow, i am awe struck.

On Saturday April 21st, 2007, asphyxia (79) writes:

I decided I must come check your work out since you commented on mine... looked at your top ten to get to this. Nice to meet you, Natalie, who speaks wonders. I love how you conjoined some words. It was a nice playful touch to an intense poem.

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Winter Born (166) writes:

These deja viewed phantasmaglories I've seen in.verse and in.scission I love the play with words... I will have to read the rest of your work now...

On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Any poem that can soulsear Jon so deeply ah got to be a classic :) This knocked me senseless with adrenaline-rush glee..Bloomin' fantastic!

On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

*has

On Monday November 13th, 2006, Instant Insanity (768) writes:

I loved the third Stanza in this piece. Do you know how you can read something and get a completely different approach on the subject. I think thats how I felt in this poem. Nicely written ][ ][

On Monday May 1st, 2006, Ainsof (1738) writes:

*no phrase I could conjure will ever compete* wow... but I can meditate on these lines and feel a serenity in the face of chaos that is noble and timeless

On Monday February 13th, 2006, ApathysKiss (466) writes:

mindblowing perfection/divinity/surreal and yet awash in abysmal devotion...an awe-inspiring apotheosis...no wonder this is number 1 on your top 10 =). -=ak=-

On Wednesday November 9th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

mmmm words sweet as dark chocolate, poetic dessert to be savored. as always purr, your work amazes me. beautiful write. simply delicious language...i can't say enough

On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, abattoir (148) writes:

I agree with 29 letters. this piece was captivating...uniquely written. beautifully sang.

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:

wow. from start to finish i was completely enraptured! lovely!

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) writes:

powerful, very nice flow and...favs.

On Monday January 31st, 2005, AniDayz (1289) writes:

your words illustrate such beauty...this is powerful and captivating and particularly meaningful to me. **talented** and exceptionally done. you've grasped my heart in its entirety.

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, stormtalk (911) writes:

Awww, you mentioned my name in your wedding vows! ::blushes:: I'm touched. :D

On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Sin (1639) writes:

this was purrfection set upon a page..the whole second stanza was just amazing..it made my heart flutter and brought a smile to my face just to read it..absolutely lovely ~kristy

On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

I love your choice of words on every poem and this ones sing-along type of feel. You are one of the people that make this site what it is, great write, I envy you.

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Amazing... so much so that I'm intimdated by your talent. Thanks so much for all of the comments...I appreciate it more than you realize :)

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Twilight (2104) writes:

damn purr...this was gorgeous. every picture...every word. and that last verse was flawless. im melting inside...this being the perfect example of incredible poetry.

On Monday October 25th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

*here I am..I couldn't leave this without saying something.....this was...just amazing,stunningly beautiful...simply divine :)

On Monday October 25th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

'wildperfect in this bent machine'...I had to smile at that part...I'm almost afraid to comment on this,in knowing I could never do this justice with my words I almost feel as though to attepmt to would somehow taint the beauty of this piece....but still,

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

don't.... ever... stop.... writing.... sheeeeeezzzz nat.... *sigh* i needn't tell you or anyone that i knew your writing would match your personality in whatever ways... in my present condition i hold your list as a box of treasures who's wonder my fathom

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

could not envelope even at the best of times. one by one to be plucked and savoured at rare moments of clarity. this piece is timeless. - Daemon.

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

and, briefly bumping off the sincerity curb... deeper than... timeless. ;)

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:

love how you make new words and STILL get your meaning across....clearly...well...almost clearly...after all...it's beyond words :P

On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, Jadednoir (38) writes:

And I am left as usual, stunned and dazzled. This piece wreaked vuknerable surrender that was anknowledged and celebrated. You are such a feeler. You are divine. ~Jade~

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, NikesRain (1507) writes:

A Kaleidoscope of beauty to read...amazing... Nike

On Monday May 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:

your poetry prowess. such beautiful words spun into such wonderful pieces. a very enchanting and captivating read. reading your stuff really awes my mind. :)

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (159) writes:

Wow, well I'm sorry purr. I just have to do it. I mean, there's no way around it! You're going on my favourites! Hehe. You are a brilliant poet... *speachless* =-MO-=

On Monday April 12th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

this is...i dont really know....just wonderful.~~~Grave

On Monday April 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

ah, be still my struckquavering heart! nay, lostlate alas. 'tis even now aswirl and immersed, drowning in lingwitchery and pleasedperfect supplication. girl, you shiver my quiver!

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, Lynaes (1138) writes:

Your words are so full of wisdom. Utterly enchanting and magnificent, so much depth. I loved this. ~L

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

*so soulshot with marvels I'm honoured in dream*phenomenal and simply superb write.**** my dear purr.*standing ovation*can you hear the clapping.again ****.knight

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

such a beautiful mix of endless words that fill my soul with amazement...just wow...your tongue is one I envy...

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

mmm... tongue :p

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

meltcolour my psyche with physical heat-oh, this is so...i know the feeling is all i can say...and it's wonderful...

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

purrfect. purrfect!

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

'this magic profusion this hyperreality drowns all my words in your reign so divine...' drowns all my worlds, all my words ...'so soulshot with marvels I’m honoured in dream '...

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

_awesome,purr...as always,the eloquence of your wording power leave my head spinning..."What language does justice to worlds so supreme?" was awesome...and i loved the last stanza...you are...wow...-tim

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Alanarchy (1638) writes:

Jeez. Go ahead and take my breath away, why don't you. "my liege, my addiction" I always find myself drowning in your words. VERY well done, purr.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:

*speechless*

On Friday March 26th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (345) writes:

You know what, this poem right here made my night. The first good work I've read in days, DAYS! Hats off. +T.P.U+

On Friday March 26th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

I enjoyed the feel of this one very much - "in majesty captured in gods of the heart, and no phrase I could conjure will ever compete". Beautiful lines that captured the essence of your title so well. Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341) writes:

"EndLess and enraptured /your beautiful artlands","with these silverblue visions /This Eden moon rising "...these lines are totally entrancing...so goes for the rest of the poem and the unsurpassable amount of emotion and intent...-l-

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

This masters all words into a beautiful whole .. I am touched and in profound aweness.

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

purr purrpurr purr... purr........ purr.. How the heck am I suppose to comment on this? I am soulstruck by words that were not meant for this world.. meant for me to see.. I think I forgot my way back...

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

The rhythm of this is divine. and the wording...so beautiful. And the ending...perfect. I noticed the bent machine refering to one of the first things you posted :p Does that qualify me as being obsessed with your works?

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

Beautifully gorgeous.

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

I agree with capt. Your world is a fun place with fun words. Reminds me of Narnia. As chaotic as this one felt it also had a feeling of... not-quite-triumph-not-quite-defeat? Wonderful either way, loved it. ~Ship!

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, MercyRain (135) writes:

there is some fun play in this... a malleable language and yet the paradox as you delve into expression free of language and yet still you language to describe...

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, MercyRain (135) writes:

though this would more than justify your word creations... more meaning than the words themselves confer... sum more than parts, etc. very cool

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

'These deja viewed phantasmaglories I’ve seen in.verse and in.scission These heartstars colliding: unbound ...' I am drowned; this poem is too beautiful for me to grace it w/ words... only a silent breath ... deeper than ... sigh ...

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

'EndLess and enraptured ... meltcolour my psyche with physical heat ... in gods of the heart...' i drown deeper... your words are more divine then the gods; i could live in your words... your world... i am :soulseared: ... deeply ...

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, Bast (901) writes:

wildperfect. what a glorious smashing of words together. lovely write.

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

oh man ... phantasmaglories ... oh man - a bounty of mondomelds in this one .. combolectric even .. i'm honestly fascinated by the wordworld in which you reside .. and the beautiful anticipation is so freakin' cool ... good luck and all that jazz ... fun

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

guy

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, flying_fox (770) writes:

well... jesus h christ. This espouses passion of the highest order... I am so very impressed. My heart melts and am also breathless with anticipation for you... come what May. Fox

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

Simply fantastic, to describe this is finding it is wordless..."meltcolour my psyche with physical heat", if this is wordless, i want to not be able to speak, your described passion astounds me...^vTracerv^

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, BleedSilver (374) writes:

I agree with tracer...veeerrrry deep...too deep for my shallow squirrel mind anyways...phantasmaglories was a cool word. Great. *stares at purr in utter contemplating silence*

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, anth (1612) writes:

im wordless, so i just sit here grinning like a chesire cat

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