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"Undone" by Jadednoir

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Such a graceful way of living.
If only we hadn't been born into this
There is only one way out;through

Lets live a simple existence
No ladder to climb, or money to burn time
A simple life, modest

Detach myself from the usual
The standards of living to which i am bound
We should live humble
and kind
Not pure, not restrained
No simple worries to be complained

Leave me to my whims
Leave me high above the mountain peaks, shivering height
tattering my limbs
like a hawk soaring upon the wind

This has gone so far
Past can't be made undone
Human beings Last of their kind
Why can't we destruct the reptilian mind



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On Sunday December 14th, 2003, purr_verse (1437) writes:
The penultimate stanza is marvellous. otherwise, for my comments, i'll echo bakkhus. great work. purr


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'Past can't be made undone." Unfortunate, yet true; this is a breath of perfect purity for the soul of poetry...splendid words, splendid write.


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:
this was very unique. Why can't we live within our means. its seems that for me, when things are simplier life is more fruitful. very good write here Jade. :::OLd


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
I like the words you use! Very Beautiful it kind of sets my mind into an alternate reality so i can actually see what it is you are describing! ~Lydia~


On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, Jadednoir (38) writes:
Thanks.....your words mean so much to me..... I need comments and criticizism....thanks alot!!~Jade~



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