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11/6/03
Created By: pushblood and Jadednoir

Never Control My Nevers (Part 1)

Silken floods of pretensions seep into my veins.
False stone not yet time to leave my body as bait.
Must carry out, must leave this place.
Fulfill my destiny thus my fate.

As I wine her and dine her,
Leave my blood and flesh for the taking.
I… I…
Control my nerves.
Yet my fingertips take everything until there’s nothing left.
Eyes so blue, eyes so true.
I just wish I could take everything out of you.
Induce me, confuse me, and leave me hanging as if I was losing.
Nails and teeth….
Entice my meat.
You thought this was true,
you entrap me with a tender touch and a brutal grasp, something a new.

Only a few would know the dismay I could bring.
Angels and demons,
above and below,
Haunting your conscience,
We’ll never go.

She laughs,
He stares,
Stuck in the indulgence of mortality and man.
The cycle will eventually unwind,
All mankind will die.

Beast vs. Beast!

Time to rewind………..




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On Sunday December 14th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'Silken floods of pretensions seep into my veins' Damn, this is a great line... the perfect intro to a poem to flood the veins w/ silk, 'Leave my blood and flesh for the taking.'


On Thursday November 13th, 2003, MrGrieves (2) writes:
so many good lines in this poem that flowed beautifully as i read it. never have guessed this came from 2 different minds.especially liked the opening lines "Silken floods of pretensions seep into my veins. as Linda Richman would say "its like butter"


On Sunday November 9th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
raw and erotic..I loved this piece, simple as that...*Vel*


On Saturday November 8th, 2003, urbanhumility (1352) writes:
a most intrisic design is cast here...alchemy of you two is divine.....intelligent realizations are in your prose......urban


On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Jadednoir (38) writes:
thank you.. if you look.. I have commented on some of your works pushblood and i are honored to receive such words of wisdom.... you are splendid. Å~Jaded~Å


On Saturday November 8th, 2003, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
this was excellent. i really enjoyed it.



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