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See If I...

well go ahead and try to break me.

i'm already broken into pieces so small
there's not much left to tear apart.

stamp on me

see if i flinch.

stab me and see if i fall.

i've already let go of every inch
of self worth
i may have had left.

it was disintegrating in my hands anyway.
i set it free.

there's no use for it here anymore.

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On Sunday March 30th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:

This was incredible with how it expressed conceited like animosity but revealed such a fragile insecurity at the same time! For this alone, not to mention the concept, this piece was great! Amongst your best! Awesome!

On Wednesday August 30th, 2006, Morbid_insanity (114) writes:

So releaving, Such a feeling of stregnth. Above it all. "Stab me and see if I fall" Positively brilliant. Nice write ~Josh

On Thursday October 20th, 2005, VenomPlease (180) writes:

I love how this has that *sting* to it... so raw... so great.

On Wednesday October 19th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:

This is good...I like the details you've added into this...good wording as well...I like it. *Evangel*

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