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daddy, i said my first word today
and i smiled today
felt so safe today
daddy, i said my first word today
and i love you oh-so-much

daddy, i went to the park today
had so much fun today
the world's that kinda place today
daddy, i went to the park today
and i love you lots and lots

daddy, i kissed a boy today
was so nervous today
i'm so grown up today
daddy, i kissed a boy today
but i'm still your little girl

daddy, i got detention today
i guess i messed up today
i got so angry today
daddy, i got detention today
and i kinda love you too

daddy, i cut my wrist today
it's all so empty today
i just don't care today
daddy, i cut my wrist today
and i'd love you if i could feel

daddy, i think i died today
i saw you cry today
and i miss you today
daddy, i think i died today
still just your lost little girl



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On Sunday August 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:
_god...talk about a painful emotional freefall...slowly disconnecting to the point of numbness and beyond.well done.


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, Heart of Stone (32) writes:
I absolutely love this. I love my dad to death, but this poem makes me sort of see how much I really put him through. This is good. -Heart


On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, braindead_poet (581) writes:
hmm... sad; very well written.. just because people have kids doesn't mean they're parents, or good ones at that. i may have pulled something a little different from this, but what i got was a girl looking for her father's love, and she got it a bit late


On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:
W.O.W. I CAN SAY NOTHING ELSE...W.O.W.


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Wantusi (46) writes:
Wow...and wow.. Please do keep writing..


On Monday November 17th, 2003, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
woah! fuck that was awesome! i love the way it was written, the structure. i also love the repatition you used. it made the message all the more powerful. keep it up. i really liked this one


On Monday November 17th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
creepy and sad.. i like it



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