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i still remember
when you said you'd be there forever
and i still remember
when they told me you were gone
and i still remember
seeing all those cuts and bruises
and i still remember
long ago when there were none

and i still remember
when you'd smile and life was perfect
and i still remember
when my whole existance was you
and i still remember
when you told me you wished you were dead
and i still remember
when you made that wish come true

and i still remember
when you'd say not to wreck my eyeliner
and i still remember
when it ran with all the tears
and i still remember
when you weren't there to stop them
and i still remember
me wishing that you were still here

and i still remember
how much it hurt you to smile
and i still remember
how you'd kiss away the pain
and i still remember
when you ran out of kisses
and i still remember
everything fading to grey

and i still remember
when you promised me you'd be there
and i still remember
but i guess that i dont care
and i still remember
when perfection turned to a wreck
and i still remember
but i think i'd sooner forget...


xXx-for-aaron-xXx



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On Friday March 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Wow man that was very very good!!!


On Friday May 19th, 2006, empty_remains (78) writes:
this was perfect, thank you so much for sharing you pain in a beautiful way. i haven't cried over a poem in a long time. your words are beautiful..


On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, Sin (1639) writes:
tragic yet lovely in its pain...


On Monday October 24th, 2005, GothicBlack (268) writes:
this is heartwrenching. I could feel my heart breaking with the sorrow in this poem. It's an emotional poem. ~gothic~


On Monday March 21st, 2005, An Expired Member (42) writes:
that was nice, I liked the form and the flow, but most of all the emotion, great.


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
That is bloody awsome mate, really is!! i give it a 9/10!! :)


On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
incredible


On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (85) writes:
I loved it, it flows wonderfully. def going on faves---steph


On Wednesday June 2nd, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
a very sad lingering feel to it... nice write. :)


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
defintly going on my favorites


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
Wow, I loved this..its so sad..


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, Drea (930) writes:
this made me cry. the emotion and the overwhelming feeling of sorrow. very well done.


On Thursday February 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
wow that is so sad.. :-\ hm this made me cry.. uhm i really like the way you wrote this. =)<3


On Saturday January 17th, 2004, Typhon (9) writes:
I feel you on this. So, so much.


On Saturday January 17th, 2004, DeathSentance (19) writes:
OMG that is totally amazing...I want to cry...that is going on my favorites list


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Wantusi (46) writes:
Pretty good...


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:
Theres so much emotion in here, i wonder if there's some truth to this. At any rate, how sad... but yet still beautiful. i likes. ~gothic~


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
I really like this too! I think it is great.


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:
this si a really good write, i like the story, and it flows with your words



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