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You are my Vietnam

GOD! We just can't seem to win sir! Should we pull back?!

NO NO NO!! Stay up there soldiers!!

...PULL BACK!! Let's pack up and go home!

America did the only thing it could do
when it saw that we couldn't win...
...It gave up and went home...

When I saw you, I thought of a war,
a never-ending battle with the chaotic natures
of your life, and saw that I just couldn't seem to
push through your front lines,
and so I did the only thing that I could do...
...I gave up and went home...

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On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:

you have a very unique was of putting things...i liked this a lot..and again very sad ~kristy

On Thursday January 25th, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:

p.s. i still think this is brilliant and the title was amazing

On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:

Ok. You stole this from my heart. This is exactly what I'm going through in the weirdest of ways. Thank you for this.

On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, suicideseason (2103) writes:

Compelling title.Really caught my eye.Very thought provoking piece.

On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

well done..and an interesting comparison, but it works

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