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...She Played Violin Beautifully...

If you called out for me to save you,
I would drop everything in my life to.

As you cried in my neck, "I want you back,"
I choked my heartache back into my stomach.

As you whispered in my ear so beautifully,
I sobbed into your neck, "I miss you so much."

You leaving killed me, I watched you go and I cried out, I broke down, and I died.

It's not your fault that you dont like yourself,
It's my fault that I didn't try harder to show you that.

It's not your fault you needed to find yourself,
It's my fault for not letting you go sooner.

It's my fault.
It's my fault.
It's my fault.
For god sake's it's my fault.

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On Friday August 8th, 2008, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

I'm back, again. Thank you.

On Friday February 15th, 2008, totaltrip (48) writes:

:( but I like it.

On Thursday June 22nd, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

no...not your fault *hug* ~pf

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

i keep coming back too...how could i not?

On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

I'm back. Still in love, in case you forgot.

On Monday December 12th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

an instant fav; ty for sharing, ty so very much

On Monday December 12th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

*chokes on tears* this is so powerful. its breaking my heart because i've been/still probably am the one that needs to find myself and had to walk away. it hurt from that side, but i'll never know how it hurt from the other side.

On Monday December 12th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

This is probably the best point of view i've been given to that other side. I'd give anything to express to the one I had to leave that though his feelings of guilt were valid/real, it was NOT his fault at all. theres no blame

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, An Expired Member (57) writes:

I know exactly what you mean by everything is my fault

On Friday July 15th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

*breathesmiles*

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:

I always find myself coming back to this. As you can tell. I've told you time and time what this means to me. It still hurts to read.. Even more so now. This is the wallpaper of my heart.. and the background of my mind today. Thank you.

On Sunday April 17th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

I'm back. And I'm in the most horrendous mood that only this poem can help. So, hello. And thank you.

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

Holy fuck, I love this. I'm never going to stop saying that.

On Tuesday April 5th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

When we do collaborate a poem together - You have to promise to use this passion, though.:P I'm still in love with this. Have I told you Thank You?;)

On Wednesday April 6th, 2005, SluG (56) writes:

You know what? Sounds like a deal. ~S.

On Sunday March 13th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

I read this several times a day.. It's affects me so hardcore it scares the shit out of me. I feel this in my heart every second of everyday. It's so personal, i feel like you ripped it out of my head.. my thoughts. If he would only listen, I would be luc

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, SluG (56) writes:

I receive notifications for people looking at my stuff everyday,but when you leave me notifications, I smile.I wrote what happened to me everyday with her for 3 weeks, and I just want you to know that I am always a stranger, but Your friend, S.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

I'm glad you aren't annoyed at me commenting on this same piece every day.. Haha. There's only a handful of poems on here that I go back to and read everytime I logon.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

This one is always the first. It's so honest and real.. and.. it's just the current script of my heart. Thank you. I can't say it enough.

On Sunday March 13th, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

*lucky to say what this says half as beautifully as you have expressed it.

On Thursday March 3rd, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

I came back to add this to my favourites. Thank you, again.

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

Holy shit. This tore me up and knocked me on my ass. For such a short write, it packed so much pain and power.. my heart is aching and I just want to read it over and over and over because for some reason, i'm enjoying the reality of the pain. Thank you s

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

*so much for sharing this. I will come back to it often. Fuck, I had to pause this comment and re-read the damn thing. The whole blaming part - it's absolutely killing me. I so need to shut up..

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

this was dripping in pain...it hurt to read..

On Saturday February 19th, 2005, purr_verse (1438) writes:

desperation, crushing; the sense of helplessness and despair in this is vivid and real. Powerful write.

On Saturday February 19th, 2005, K_Love (693) writes:

Heartclenching write, the pain in this is even hard to read. The title pulls the poem all together, wonderful words.

On Saturday February 19th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (114) writes:

The desperation and pain are so palpable here. Very emotional.

On Saturday February 19th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

very good emotion exspressed here ~~GOTHIC~~

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