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Origami Cranes

The leaves took too long
to fall off the trees
that autumn, we buried our secrets
in boxes so secure.
We could never get them back.

I wanted to dictate
my thoughts onto origami cranes,
and watch them fly away.

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On Saturday October 13th, 2007, carlosjackal (1650) writes:

=D Welcome to DP!! -Carl

On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, blue (1759) writes:

so great.

On Sunday September 3rd, 2006, blue (1759) writes:

wow, well.. this grabbed me quite forcefully, I'll go ahead and take my own meanings to heart. Thank you. ~b

On Saturday August 5th, 2006, kiss of the dark (43) writes:

[nerve endings swell and burst, contently bleeding into a wonderful demise]--this is how your poem makes me feel.....

On Saturday August 5th, 2006, dying angel (1351) writes:

perfect. every other word flowed flawlessly with the next.

On Friday February 16th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:

ditto

On Friday August 4th, 2006, evolve (2221) writes:

This is beautiful.

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