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Taste of You(in my veins)

I tasted you once
You fell to your knees
Cold and lifeless
Now you are forever with me

I can feel you here
in my veins
screamming for more
calling out too me

"I love you" you said
"I need you" you cried...
"Take me!" you demanded..
"Finish it." you begged in a weak whimper

So i did
and no more you suffer
my little doll
You feel pain no longer

I feel you hear
I hear your screams
I long for peace
You are in my dreams

I smell your hair
Your sweet perfume
always haunting me
From your shallow tomb

I feel you here
in my veins
running through me
my heart exclaims

I feel you Dear
in my soul
you are part of me
you made me whole

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On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

sounds like a good ol' fashioned healthy addiction....

On Monday December 8th, 2003, Raven (383) writes:

This hit home and hard... thank you for sharing this... _Raven

On Sunday November 23rd, 2003, Anybody_Killette (50) writes:

wow... i love..

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Jadednoir (38) writes:

are you a hopeless romantic or a romantic without hope? This is piece allres me, and the ending is piercing.. whoa..it is shaped like a dagger... very nice

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Drea (976) writes:

sad but romatic...beautiful ~Drea~

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Crystal Passion (263) writes:

hmm very interesting piece. very nice to say the least XxkRYzxX

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Thank you again Crys...It is soo nice hearing from you again. Keep in touch....Bloth

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Ophelia (312) writes:

Very nice, it makes me sad though, , , O.

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Dont be sad Ophelia, It can't rain all the time:*

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

wow! I really like this! I love the ending.

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Thank you sweetheart!!! i was wondering if anyone would ever see this work...Its my favorite so far..... i just noticed its shapped like a dagger isnt that wierd???it wasnt even on purpose. LOL

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