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Lucky Me(burning in Hell)

All alone
skine and bone
nothing to eat
ohh this terrible heat
i am nailed too the wall
crucified me
why did you leave
please.....water for my head
where did you go
I miss my death
burning in hell
what did i do
to be so lucky?

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On Monday December 8th, 2003, Raven (378) writes:

How beautifully ironic this is... again, good job. The words are your oyster... (whatever the hell that means.. but it sounds good, doesn't it?) *grin* what I mean is: this is another awesome work of yours... _Raven

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

the pain never stops some one is always hurting, happiness is just an illusion s/m

On Thursday November 27th, 2003, Alanarchy (1638) writes:

I disagree. Happiness is as real as you make it. the only difference is pain can be physical. I guess thats why it seems "realer". Thats my take, anyway. Good write Bloth.

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Drea (937) writes:

i pose the same question O did. could the pain actually continue after life?.. i believe it can. nicely written ~Drea~

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

does the pain stop with death, makes one wonder doesn't it, ........O.

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

wow this is cool

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

HEHE!!Wow! i think somebody likes me! Yayyyyyy.... i love people who casn relate to my deepest thoughts.....You are pretty cool yourself rebel.... i like your works alot too..keep in touch....BLOTH ANDII

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

a different way of saying you wish for death. cynicism is fun sometimes. write on man. U.P.

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

agrees and hands you the earnings from her tip cup today you deserve that much :P XXkRYzXX

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1872) writes:

Errr. well, err.. ok, I'll just tell you wellcome to DP.. Da monkey

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