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FAR(first night of your life)

Too far away...
I kissed you yesterday, like frozen lips on a razor blade
I tasted you,
your Blood gave me lust
your eyes gave me love
your spirit gave me life
I took you in
you are mine now
eternity is too far for those who never die

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On Monday November 10th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (705) writes:

Mmm very very nice. I am glad you left me a comment. It gave me an opportunity to read a Vgood poet's works =) Keep writing, Velvet.

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Drea (976) writes:

i truely love your work. it provokes such images that are so beautiful yet sorrowful ~Drea~

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Crystal Passion (263) writes:

frozen lips on a razorblade... awesome imagery in so few lines. Keep it up XXkRYzXX

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Thanks Doll.....Bloth

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I like this too. Your endings are so great!

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Thank you again my dear....i like to leave my readers with a lasting impression...You know something that makes you think....i hope this did it

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, SGT Bloth (200) writes:

Why thank you Seraph...It just kind of fit in there, This poem reminded me of that one love that never dies, that is almost utterly unattainable. I have found it once. I'm still trying to get there. It's where I belong.

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Seraphic (301) writes:

I like that last line :) good poem *~seraph~*

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