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BLOOD LUST(STUPID WHORE!)

YOU STUPID WHORE!
What did you think?
I only invited you here for a drink?
Well, you were right...
just one drink...
a drink of wine..
your red wine

What did you think?
What did you think?

THE CHALICE OF GOLD
to hold your soul
LIFE DRAINS FROM YOU
TO MAKE MINE NEW !!!

JUST ONE DRINK!
JUST ONE DROP!

Your neck, SO SOFT...
I JUST CAN'T STOP!!!

I'M SORRY GOD!!!!
WHAT I HAVE DONE?
GAVE HER ETERNAL LIFE
MADE US FOREVER ONE.....

Just one drink
Just one drop

THELUST IS UPON ME!!!!!
I JUST CAN'T STOP!!!

YOU STUPID WHORE!!!
What did you think?

A drunk like me
can't have just one drink.

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On Saturday February 9th, 2008, Geisha (787) writes:

I think I like when you're angry... -Geisha

On Saturday February 9th, 2008, Geisha (787) writes:

And screaming :}

On Monday February 11th, 2008, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

I'll remember that next time, I'm in your room..Hey, I'm out of meat so can you lock up the wolves this time?

On Tuesday January 29th, 2008, Syringe (79) writes:

i love the how most of the words are capitalized. sounds like you're screaming

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:

Wow. *Raven*

On Monday May 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:

lol... this cracked me up. and the words in caps put the idea of your poem forward. very nice. :)

On Friday November 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

WOW! thats cool lol! good work i like it a lot

On Friday November 28th, 2003, Raven (378) writes:

This was verrrry interesting... I loved the last line, especially... _Raven

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Drea (937) writes:

mmmm blood letting, sexy, romatic, *quivers* i agree 100% with vel ~Drea~

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:

he he..this is pretty....good, very discriptive for one solid point

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

Hehe I like this and found it kind of funny because I just watched "Once Bitten" the other day so kind of related this to that. Nice job. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (26) writes:

good write nice flow i havnt read a vampire piece for a while sparked some inspiration thanks keep it up M.H.A.

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

nice vampiric piece here....bloodletting is a sensual and erotic thing...(even when two engadge in real life) mmmmmmm

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

We need too talk Velvet

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (39) writes:

You're almost as sick as Silent. Good stuff, bro. Welcome. -C-

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (33) writes:

Nice work....... Ill check back.....your very creative and interesting....keep it up...nice write..... I love the last two lines...bye!

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

Thank you very much Face-X -Less......i'll be sure to read up on you as well

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

wowness! This is not at all what I expected and for that im quite pleased. (btw you're a cutie) XXkRYzXX

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

What exactly did you expect crys? I guess you never know someone till you read thier mind....By the way i'm not the onlky cuttie in this conversation;)

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

Have you ever played in the DARK Alleys of RavenBlack City, It is such a fun game, very nice write.................O.

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, SGT Bloth (197) writes:

i sure havent ophelia, is it a board game? comp game? i'll have too check it out......P.S. thanks for the comment...i looovvveee hearing from people....Bloth

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

this is REALLY good........ ~Witch~*

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, SilentStalker (1336) writes:

...nice...I really like this one...guess I'll mark it for safekeeping... -Ferg

On Monday October 27th, 2003, Seraphic (290) writes:

I'm trying to think of something profound to say, my mind is not working properly though...so saying I like it is well enough, good job *~seraph~* you ought to take a look at my poem, it's called "Blood Whores"

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