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Thoughts of a Friend by freaky
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Thoughts of a Friend

~ freaky ~

I care about you so much
But at times I don't think u know how much
You've said you wanted to be with me
Every time that seems to fade away
You tell me you love me as more than a friend
Then why do you go find someone else?
Why can't you see that she is only with you to hurt you?
Why do I see this but yet you are blind to this?
You cry at night because u don't know what to do
And yet you stay with her and let the pain carry on
I wish you could see the person in front you is the right person for you
You deserve so much better then what you have
I wish you would open your eyes and see what I see

Copyright 2003 freaky
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  • A former member wrote: Yeh.. I think I also understand what you mean but closed minds and eyes are diseases that we have to face in our daily life. But nice write.

  • A former member wrote: i know what you mean... keep it real

  • A former member wrote: you know i know, let it out, or it eats you up inside. definatly lookin forward to more from you

  • Drea On Monday, October 27, 2003, Drea (822) wrote:

    punch his brother again..that will help..lol.. so much heart.. i cant help but love this ~Drea~


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