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still

Suffice::

completely

I wander you..

Broken miserably

As I stab aimlessly at the dark

I don’t hide behind the curtains anymore

As I did when I was young with apathy and strange.

so suffice::

Completely missing you.

There is time.

To recklessly take you on and take it over.

Push it over.

DESTRUCTIVE: AND MY HEART SPILLS OVER THE TOP

i drown in it.

We drown.

My delicate.

I have murdered you.

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On Wednesday September 27th, 2006, Jadedwings (356) writes:

I was curious when I saw the name of this poem...for I have one of the same name...I like it alot!

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Brenya Rose (190) writes:

Once again, utterly breathtaking. I am constantly amazed by the beauty of yoyr words.

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, stormtalk (908) writes:

I like the last line, of course ;) The rest of it was less clear than your usual work, but exercises in disassociation from normal word combinations are always fun. It's good, but I think you could make it better by clarifying it.

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, purr_verse (1435) writes:

this is...excellently quietly disturbing. great stuff.

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Cinn (188) writes:

Very interesting read, nice work. -Cinn

On Monday January 3rd, 2005, frozen (747) writes:

wow very capturing loved this

On Monday January 3rd, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:

wow, dark, twisted, intense, great work. loved it *runs off to read again

On Monday January 3rd, 2005, sIo (884) writes:

this was so....murdermystery like. very nice. i like it hehe.

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