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I took your promise.
And inclosed it in my hands.

I remained positive,
Because I know I ruin everything.


But you are late again
And this cant keep happening


Because I have nothing left in me
To forgive this.





Your words don’t mean shit.




When you constantly rip them away from me.

Replacing them with new, consoling ones.




And again.


I take your promise and hold it close to me.


I closed my eyes and tried to pretend


You were going to save me this time.














("dont say you're sorry"-broken)



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On Friday November 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Very clear. It has a lot of emotion in it. I can feel the pain as I read... powerful...


On Saturday September 18th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
this is great. simple, clear, true.


On Monday August 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
This is hot stuff! I love the line, "I closed my eyes and tried to pretend"... in some way that just speaks to me. I love it. Can't wait to read more of your work.


On Monday August 30th, 2004, Lynaes (1128) writes:
Oh my god.. I can relate to this more than you could imagine. Aside from that, this is excellent, your wording is always so fluent, your message like a crystal clear punch. Very nice work. I love it.



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