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isolate

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the dawn is weak.
with early shadows

walk with me,
my only sedative.

i’ve dreamt that I wasn’t here.

and its torn me from this place.

I stumble
into their eyes

you are another world unlike.
this very dark place

forgetting you.

dazed, walking sleepless.

my only sedative.

to numb my pain.

(“it bothers me”- evets)

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On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:

this definitely had a very mistic quality to it...i loved it...-l-

On Monday August 30th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Alluring, softly haunting and so precisely described. Intriguing work, wonderfully captivating. I love this.

On Monday August 30th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

"walk with me, my only sedative" .. Just, y'know. Wow. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Monday August 30th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

this evokes the sensation of isolation beautifully. fabulous write.

On Monday August 30th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_amazing,Ex.truly beautiful.

On Sunday August 29th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

The isolation you articulate flows over me like a wave... I feel where you are all too well... and the puzzle at the end is all too obvious for me... your writing is no less than beautiful.

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