I like this one... very heartfelt.. leaves you wondering...

simple brilliance, common metaphor, graceful delivery.

& ... nice angle

really love this piece! it sinks into a place inside,seems like it's an emotional ride with such few words. *669*

Hah, that's awesome. Short, driven, and cutting. "The ball is in/ My court/ it is your turn/ To feel it tear right out of you" is great... it sounds like you're talking about ripping out hearts, which is a favorite pasttime of mine.

That's what I got out of it, as well...ripping out hearts...the structure was punchy, sort of like each strained pull, it seemed to me. Nice write.

simple and meaningfull... Kinda unlike you.. hmm.. the stile that is.. I like it tho.. Monkey .. btw nice use of space

Simple and meaningful, unlike you?! You monkey fece! Hehe... just kidding... I read the sentence after ;)