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Return my disfigured heart.

A pitiful excuse.

My denial.



Hand it back over to me.

The ball is in


My court.




It is your turn


To feel it tear right out of you.




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On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
I like this one... very heartfelt.. leaves you wondering...


On Saturday September 18th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
simple brilliance, common metaphor, graceful delivery.


On Saturday September 18th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
& ... nice angle


On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (567) writes:
really love this piece! it sinks into a place inside,seems like it's an emotional ride with such few words. *669*


On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:
Hah, that's awesome. Short, driven, and cutting. "The ball is in/ My court/ it is your turn/ To feel it tear right out of you" is great... it sounds like you're talking about ripping out hearts, which is a favorite pasttime of mine.


On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, evolve (2296) writes:
That's what I got out of it, as well...ripping out hearts...the structure was punchy, sort of like each strained pull, it seemed to me. Nice write.


On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1804) writes:
simple and meaningfull... Kinda unlike you.. hmm.. the stile that is.. I like it tho.. Monkey .. btw nice use of space


On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:
Simple and meaningful, unlike you?! You monkey fece! Hehe... just kidding... I read the sentence after ;)



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