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Secrecy.

Secrecy.

Draw you near.

There are things you

don’t know about me.

Dark and dirty.

Strange.

Dwell in it.
Bathe in it.

Curiosity is lovely.

But you will never know…

Because im afraid you will think im ugly.

And different. Too different. Dumb. Stupid.

Disgusting. Childish.

And I don’t want to hurt again.

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On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:

Painful and strategically written and structured. This flooded me with a cold feeling of desperacy. Evocative, indeed.

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

Ahhh, a raw emotion vomit session! I love these, they're some of your best. You're dark... dirty... strange... different... and better than the rest for it!

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

sinister indeed.. :O( made my mouth taste bad and my stomac want a banana.. urghh.. *stops dancing and sits*

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

I love this.. haunting and sinister, leaves you hanging in desperation on each word.. wonderfully constructed, so effective and atmospheric. I could relate to this on a certain level. Dark and intriguing, excellent work.

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