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Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant

Some never make it to the town
Where the noise stops

So what if I seem dead to you


::Killing me inside::
Until I don’t matter the way I do-
(Anymore)

You want to shut up
…But you keep speaking

Are your lies…..
  
    Apart of this now?




(You’re making no sense)



And

When I saw the glow::
I thought you had changed.

But you still burn/// me the same


You pushed me out.

I’m unwanted again-

//supposedly

And




Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant

I shattered under your heavy skies


Million pieces
Broken like you again.


Never stop waiting.

But I’m walking fast


Away


Away.










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On Sunday October 31st, 2004, rondant (76) writes:
this is a great read, i like you use of words


On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:
a very truthful and efficient write...-l-


On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, Juggalotus (73) writes:
There are times when you never want to say goodbye, never want to leave...


On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
Some of your writing i can hear sung as I read it, this being a good example. I like "But you still burn me the same" - that stuck out as particularly original/artfully simple/meaningful. Mmm... poor sun.


On Monday April 26th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
This is insanely gorgeous...it blows my mind.


On Saturday April 24th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
You really do have beautiful eyes...Windows to the soul, but i cant see past the aesthetic value...


On Saturday April 24th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
Dull and irrelevant...I've heard that somewhere before...This was listless...A flowing vision of grandeur (Your making no sense) gloriously done


On Friday April 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
like a darting eyed monologue ... always compelling ... reads like it's all here if you read it right ... very cool ... ( like the blue too ) funguy



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