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stellar

You cant explain
The breakdown of the stars
And the philosophy.

They seem to be falling

It is time we spun out of control.
We’ve been in trouble for so long.
Hate me now.

They pierced the navy with their edge.

X just like me X

They’re here to die alone.

And feel the pain weigh down
From the oceans dwell
You can understand

Why I don’t care tonight.

:::So I bleed. And I breathe no more:::
Amy.

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On Saturday December 25th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

I think the vagueness in this made it extremely worth reading again and then again. Very dreamy write, enjoyed it. ~ship!

On Monday April 26th, 2004, evolve (2220) writes:

The flow of this...so graceful and elegant...tragically beautiful.

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, stormtalk (910) writes:

Entirely surreal... reading this is like trying to interpret a dream: it can make sense in many contexts, but you're always left wondering which one, if any, are correct. Fun!

On Monday April 19th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

jeez....wow... this is something else. ever so graceful poetic flows, images of disasterous magnitude. bare and simple, pure, from the heart. i feel even with what ive taken from this.. it will draw me back for many reads. you're not just a stunning face.

On Sunday April 18th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

_i can't say enough how much i can relate to the purity of your writing.more often than not,you leave me breathless.-tim

On Sunday April 18th, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:

your genius surpasses my intelligence

On Monday April 19th, 2004, anth (1610) writes:

man this is sublime, i love the first stanzas, this is stellar work, elegant. theres just so much here, im awed

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