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Your eyes are wounded;
Cold blooded eyes.
Shattered like auto(mobile) glass.
I’d hate to know you.

I got to know you.


And you notice I am lost
Without your guiding touch
To deceive me into your cold
Tight grasp of bitterness
And wanting and waiting

Its not easy to let go of you


Still I try to pull myself from your outstretched arms
My eyes always search for yours.
A child for her mothers consent.
I am always afraid that you’re gone.
Away from me.


Still I manage to bleed.
Always the last drop.
The last time.
I scream
you wont ever notice, I am


In dire need of a new friend.
A new everything.


I am




So broken.




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On Thursday April 29th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
i loved this poem of yours best... its kinda in my face... i always feel like that...unrequitted love stinks, i live wif this hurt everyday...tis was a great write! emotive... so real... thumbs up!


On Monday April 26th, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:
This poem is breathtaking..every single word.


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
_this was like having an atom bomb dropped on me...but somehow i survived...all i can really say is this...every word of this piece hurt.every letter.damn.-tim


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
Aww don't break... ::mummifies you in duct tape:: there, all better. As for the poem... I have to agree with your newest fans, it's very beautiful.


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
My screen shows "I am" as the last line, then scrolls down to "So broken" afterwards - it surprised me and added a nice effect. Overall... beautiful.


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Six-Out (1823) writes:
Heh...wow. Kitty is right, I could feel the emotion in your words. I must admit, I don't talk to you much, or comment on your work much, but damn girl, you can write.


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
Damn.. this is just how I'm feeling right now about a certain young man. Wow, most amazing. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Bast (896) writes:
oh. man. this is beautiful. this... this hurts. it aches. it is heartbreaking.



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