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In my blood

I want
what you promised me…
Undo what you’ve done and say you’re
sorry

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(You think your right but your wrong. What does that mean to you?)

*your right, my right*

I bleed before I cut
Swelling with pain.
I rot inside out like a
serenade

Spill me

Spirillum - spinning inside.

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On Monday January 17th, 2005, dropsofhate (55) writes:

wonderful imagery. i like this alot

On Monday April 26th, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:

This is very vivid...a clear image in my head...nice.

On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

your words remind of of a song. a powerful one-full force through the speakers and blowing me away. without limits.

On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

I like the loose rhyme between "pain" and "serenade" - overall, I think this would make a good song. Spirillum... yummy. I'll give you more comments on this one when I can think more clearly.

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