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The muted agony
Of lavender fields
They flow with the storm’s demise
The sun going out with the glow
Of an early summer fire

Dying under the wind
A kiss to the sand
“Goodbye again”

“I sold you the lies”
I thought its what I wanted
I was so wrong to fall
And tie myself to you.

Not losing it.
Not losing it.

Your name is everywhere
Written in its bitter frustration
Messiness in my emotional exploitation


Locked myself in the bathroom
Washed up on the sands of ‘goodbye again'
And wanting it so bad….
Again.




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On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, The Kid Of Corruption (148) writes:
I agree with Narcissisme, Intense. I like this piece.


On Monday April 26th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
This is intense as well as inspiring...great.


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
Somewhere between summer suns and bitter tears... very beautiful. I like how it begins with "muted agony" and ends with "wanting it so bad... again"... nice transition.


On Monday April 12th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (350) writes:
the first stanza is a poem all by itself...a majestic piece, i must say...your work always so delightful...-l-


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Absolutely beautiful. So much grace, I really felt the esscence of your words. I particularly loved the first stanza. Gorgeous work. ~L


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:
great imagery, especially in the first two stanzas


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
this is a good example of whats truely poetic. wonderful piece of writting. le ' beautiful


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
_your writing...it's gorgeous...your style...so enchanting...your writing is so full of energy and beauty...and mystery...your writing is you.-tim



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