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What we have wont hurt anymore
What we made into the stars
Called it the epiphany of god and
Lust blown eyes of shattered faith
And a sweetness filled desire
Infecting the tongues of others
You know.
Others you wait for.


And you breathe the life.
Letting it destroy.
So fast to become one of us.
Dedicated hands, pulling away
Ultimately revealing the naked truth
We shell out and bleed more for the freak show.


Make me hell


The gust of wind is taking me apart
And selling me out and I feel betrayed
As truth tells a lie and a lie is my ruin.


God is lust and we find ourselves
His slaves of used up sex, but we sell.
We sell so fast. Were spinning unto less of ourselves.



Just ranting.


::exhilarants:: are we the stars of yesterdays fall out with reality?




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On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, stormtalk (910) writes:
The first stanza is really exceptional... its just plain good writing. "Make me hell" hit me hard, too, and the last line got me thinking... one of your best in a while... I love it.


On Monday April 12th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:
this was a splendid read of unsurpassable talent...truly inspiring, once again...thank you for being such a gifted poet...-l-


On Friday April 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:
_"As truth tells a lie and a lie is my ruin."...my god that is brilliant.as the others have stated,the imagery was awesome...and this was so intense...passionate...wow.thank you.:)tim


On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, birdwell (177) writes:
magnificent expressive imagery.. "make me hell" that's splendid ~db~


On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Typhon (9) writes:
Agreed, the imagery was amazing...



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