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red, green and blue.

What’s left to hate of me?
What’s left to destroy?
I am nothing to you anymore
So just toss me

Over the bridge
I fall

It feels so good to let go
No one ever understood
How killing yourself really works

Deep relaxation
It is the most beautiful thing in the world
Everyone thinks suicide is bad
And horrible, and not worth it

But no one is ever strong enough to try
And let all your fears, and cares fade
Disintegrating into the wind
And shadowing over this city

::Your last, deep breath::

Before you hit the water
You just drown, slowly to sleep
Your final resting place

It’s so beautiful
Your last sight
The colors, streetlights
All swirling into one euphoria

You close your eyes
And you remember

There is nothing like this pain

There was nothing to make it go away.

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On Friday February 20th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

beatiful words this peice creates a vivd image....::LoKi::

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, birdwell (173) writes:

beautiful imagery , and idealism. i really like this poem ~db~

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:

i think i would know whether it is a suicide poem...or not....

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:

the only way this would make sense is if the person tossing you is but another entity of yourself...and if this is the case, then it is a suicide poem, indeed...

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:

this is sort of complex...you said "so just toss me"...then you said " no one ever understood how killing yourself really works"

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

Ok, I definitely didn't read this carefully enough... it's not suicide, because you say "So just toss me/Over the bridge"... also... "::your last, deep breath::" made me take a deep breath... gotta love poetry that has a physical effect.

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

If you want me to go really deeply into this... I'd say that the suicide lies in driving the person you're addressing in the beginning to throw you over... kind of a... passive self-destruction.

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:

its not exactly a suicide poem, look deeper than that....theres more to it...

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

Also... the end of this was incredible beautiful... "It’s so beautiful/ Your last sight/ The colors, streetlights/ All swirling into one euphoria" - that's so visual and enthralling... despite being a suicide poem... I like it ;)

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

^ personal morphine... just ask

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