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Closed Door

Closed Door
Windowless Walls
Ice-cold Stone Floor
Stand Then Falls
Broken Window glass
Still No Way Out
Sickening Mass
Of Self-Doubt
Screaming Silence
Wordless Terror
Psychic Violence
Times Inferior

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On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

this had my eyes darting back and forth, line for line i was caught in this vortex of thoughts. very intense. well done.

On Sunday June 13th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

I felt like i was in the dark being stalked by something when I read this. Great work.

On Thursday June 10th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

there is despair, within your few words,you have described a maze that many cannot describe..........urban

On Thursday June 10th, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (80) writes:

man just reading it makes me feel alone scared and trapped. hits hard.

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_Stunning...that's all i can say.:)tim

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

What an amazing ryhme...I want to write like this...*pouts in jealousy, then hugs storm* Good job, Storm...Now you hafta write more often...~Mikey

On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Helplessness, and yet you know there should be something, anything you can do about it...This breeds terror indeed...

On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

i refer to those events that you wish were different, you ask why me? why you...there is no reason, there doesnt have to be and that is the frustration right there. Senselessness inane fury!

On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Stand then falls... Gives a feeling of complete frustration and the urge to scream is relentless, a mixture of mindlessness amongst that despise of events

On Friday April 23rd, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

i agree with demon.*wordless terror.this was short and to the point.very blunt but i thoroughly enjoyed reading.nice write.-knight

On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

personal hell... i like it storm. simple, straightforward, powerful. "Sickening Mass Of Self-Doubt" -- the point where the feeling hit me.

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