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Hate Me

If I could do one single thing
I'd erase you from my mind
There's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice
make me deaf, kill my sense, make me blind
But nothing is going to take away
this pain you make me feel
With every breath you open up a wound
that will not heal
With every fucking breath you take
I hate you even more
And while you go unbruised from this
I'm feeling like a whore
I know this was my own fault too
The cost of loving you
So now when we are way past that
I hope you hate me too

Storm

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On Friday September 22nd, 2006, GreyDividing (202) writes:

Shit, emotions are sometimes way too taxing. Whoooa! good shit.

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, VenomPlease (181) writes:

Awesome write. Couldn't have said it better....

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Nightwing (12) writes:

wow, I really like this piece! a lot of emotion here ... great write!!

On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, lordshadow (215) writes:

I liked this very very much.

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (72) writes:

very good.very very good

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

god..how simple thing called love can turn to hate...seems we can never hate another trully unless we once loved them...i will be reading more of your work..nicely done :)

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

"With every breath you open up a wound that will not heal" that says it all.

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

With every write your perseverance gets stronger..and there is a lot of anger in your poems..the perfect formula for great poetry.-Kefka

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

very intense... you wish pain on that person in the same sense you feel. Your emotions were well delivered. your work is very good. :::OLd

On Friday November 14th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1849) writes:

not bad at all... and I agree with urban, this is angerfull..

On Friday November 14th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

Wow the anger in this was very intense. I like how you wrapped this up in the end with a subtle hint that if the person doesn't hate you after all of that you'll give them reason to. Well done.

On Thursday November 13th, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:

heh i feel that way a lot too, it was kinda ironic, it's like I feel those things but never know how to say it, nice job~finaldestiny~

On Thursday November 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Powerful,deep and sympathetic. For I have felt exactly like this and still do, its like you have written some of my feelings down for me. Excellent. Keep it up! xb.sx

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