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Rip of My Wings

Rip off my wings
claw out my eyes
Lock me up
and melt the key
You can cut out my heart
and invade my world
Just violate my mind
and rape my soul
Torture my body
Take my life away
It doesn't matter to me
No Pain, you see

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On Thursday April 3rd, 2008, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:

Dark and intense, very 'in my face' style!

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

pain....a wonderful extension of raw pleasure...or are they one in the same?..great penning here...More please!

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, ThoughtsOthoughts (16) writes:

pain is only felt when you let it take over you...intense writing...well written

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

No Pain? How do you do that? Beautiful and powerful.

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:

the more i read it the more i love it! keep it up!!

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:

this is great! i feel the emotion coming from it.

On Monday February 16th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

_very nice.great imagery,too.when we are empty,what is pain?thanx,Storm-tim

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

hmmmmmm yes, thought provoking.... u know what it makes me think... "No Pain, you see" ... false, a lie. makes me think that pain is indeed felt by the writer and (s)he is merely lying about it. just a thought, certainly an interesting work worth reading

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

* over again

On Friday January 9th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

not bad.. reminds me of Suicideseasons buttrfly poem. where he ribs of the wings. this could be a poem in contrats to it.. wonderfull. Monkey

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

Definitely... they're both great poems, too. They should be posted next to each other somewhere... it would make for an awesome contrast of ideas.

On Friday December 19th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:

I was drawn in by the title and am glad I was - good one! Ciao, T/S

On Saturday November 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

I like this...no pain...good write-Siva

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Yes, most heartless..or shall i say painless.-Kefka

On Thursday November 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Painful poem in itself. welldone xb.sx

On Friday November 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

I really like this, good work

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