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"The Him and the Her of One More Night" by XCryingMinotaurX

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It is dark and cold.
Basement bedroom.
Bare feet upon red carpet.
A breeze enters through the blinds.
William Orbit on the stereo: "Adagio for Strings". Remix.

Bare feet leave red carpet.
Drowning into blood red sheets. Soft.
His body will not rest alone tonight. Human contact. Her heat.
He let her have her way. Always her way. The only way.

Lips touched flesh and body spasms knocked books off shelves.
Her tongue found his nerve and she drank him down deep.
She made her mark. Scarred him. Marred him. She owned him.
Not forever. Not tomorrow. For now. For one more night.
He tasted of perfection. She could not get enough. Ever.

Morning rain like holy water washed away the night before.
She spent hours staring at the glow of the sun. On his naked body.
She closed her eyes to believe this dream. He opened his.
He saw her still. Sleep. Having given all she had.
He took note of her snore. Her position. Her hair upon his pillow.

Morning after spent in bed. Face to face. A pillow apart.
The future was outside the room. Waiting to take them away.
Secrets spilled out upon delicious flesh and the day dragged on.
Alone. They left the room together. Like lovers.
She had a habit of loving the ones she could not have.
He had the habit of having the ones he could not love.

This was the Him and the Her of One More Night



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On Thursday April 24th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (378) writes:
Last stanza and final line wrapped this up beautifully... I don't even know what else to say... This was extremely well done


On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, toy soldier (40) writes:
you know, i bookmarked this a long time ago. and it is still IMO the best poem on this site. realy.


On Sunday February 26th, 2006, Sin (1646) writes:
the whole write was amazing but that last stanza...it stung...this was one i wish i couldnt relate to ~kristy


On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Six-Out (1819) writes:
In pieces is where this left me. Dear god.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (87) writes:
this ripped me to pieces and made me cry. thank you--Steph


On Tuesday May 31st, 2005, Labitina (46) writes:
This was amazing I agree with cucuio on that line, that was too perfect and too true, this really was an awesome write ~Christina


On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (322) writes:
Sweet and lovely and yummy didn't like the last line though dont think it was needed -kitty


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:
I love this. by far one of my favorites


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, cucuio (215) writes:
She had a habit of loving the ones she could not have. He had the habit of having the ones he could not love... this was just wow...


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
awesome... you are a wonderful writer


On Sunday June 20th, 2004, glasshouse (804) writes:
Wow. The ending was amazing. The whole thing was amazing. I saw it so clearly... so vividly. I really loved this piece. Great work. -Glass


On Monday May 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (37) writes:
She had a habit of loving the ones she could not have. He had the habit of having the ones he could not love. Well gee, isn't that always the way things go in life? We all know it sucks, and you had an awesome write! Keep it up! : )


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:
theres a certain sadness in this poem which i think many could relate. very nicely written. :)


On Monday May 10th, 2004, knightmirror (426) writes:
*morning rain like holy water washed away the night before*amazing line in an amazing write Jen.i liked this very much.of course i like anything you do.much love,chris


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:
This appealed to me...maybe cause they have something I don't or they haven't what I don't want. Still it intrigued me. Great work with this one.


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, Bast (874) writes:
this made me cry. i miss this- i knew this, once, i knew the sweet flame, the passion of now... and god, the last stanza rips me to shreds. is this me? i hope not.



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