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Touch Brought Back Taste

Cheeks
apple red
Forehead
burning sweat

Eyes
glancing shock
Lips
screaming obscenities

Lust
oozing pores
Love
mending heart

Comatose
inside out
Uncertainty
becoming clear

Deep brown eyes
seeing insides tighten
Poetic unjustified tongue
freestyling sleepless nights
Softest tasting lips
undeniably passionatley inlove

..falling
....fallen
......failed

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On Thursday September 28th, 2006, An Expired Member (6) writes:

this def touched the heart! keep up the good work darling!

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

i,m always amazed by your work.it's ashame you're in so much pain.i said it before and i'll say it again"i wish i could mend your broken heart"much love,chris

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:

the end. it slams me to the floor.

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

the structure on this is fantastic...such passion in your words is a pleasure to read. I agree with Alanarchy too. Fox

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, Alanarchy (1689) writes:

Beautiful. The end hurt.

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, nell (328) writes:

the one worded lines create a great climax of emotion, great write;)

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

you're such a powerful structuralist ... really amplifies your beautiful words ... very sweet write ... funguy

On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, AshtrayDirt (41) writes:

either it was your words or the structure or the moment, er whatever it was point being is that i got some crazy visuals while reading this. good write...it's all about what it invokes in someone. -Dirt

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