"Hollowed, Be Thy Name"

Broken
arching back
see the spine shaking,
pressure
upon shoulders
the world comes crumbling.

Fading
well-spoken words
lost time well spent,
memories
upon fingertips
slipping out of reach.

Meaningful
she was
twice through summer's heat,
meaningless
she is
withered with gasoline stench.

Losing
sexual grip
this one-sided battle,
groping
bleeding hands
tainted pale soft skin.

Cruel
sadistic movement
wet by tormented eyes,
taste
burning flesh
feeling hips and bones.

Nightmares
she has
darkening sugar sweet sin,
question
she asks
followed by secret shadows.

Answer
it will
caressing cracked red lips,
whisper
it has
"Hollowed, be thy name."

• On Monday, December 28, 2009, Lydia Jade (1050) wrote:
  
  I agree, great great great go you, high five
  
  
• A former member wrote: i want to experience this
  
  
• On Tuesday, March 10, 2009, darkcoldplace (10) wrote:
  
  This is just plain great
  
  
• A former member wrote: ~10~
  
  
• A former member wrote: Hey mother..., how come you declare this tittle yours!!!??? just because of the ,? You should get banned for copying this tittle from IRON MAIDEN!!! by the way, you suck....
  
  
• On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Rachel (306) wrote:
  
  Watch your words, new one.
  
  
• On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Rachel (306) wrote:
  
  And furthermore, I do believe "The Lord's Prayer" came a long time before Iron Maiden.
  
  
• On Monday, April 18, 2005, Astra Dei (590) wrote:
  
  short lines, so much meaning.great title. terrific write
  
  
• On Monday, March 8, 2004, knightmirror (394) wrote:
  
  *darkening sugar sweet sin*lmao just looked up and saw tim's comment.great minds think alike.anyway brilliant.****.get used to those from me.knight
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, flying_fox (717) wrote:
  
  this is seriously good...enjoyed every line, strong imagery - it's got everything. FF
  
  
• On Saturday, February 14, 2004, capt_funguy (909) wrote:
  
  really , this does pack a lot of punch .... smooth as silk too ... funguy
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, purr_verse (1320) wrote:
  
  wonderful title...and the line itself, of course: the final stanza is especially excellent. (although the third stanza gives it a fair run for its money!!) great work. purr
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Daemonicus (610) wrote:
  
  nice structure and flow. the descriptions, and especially the last two stanzas, are very nice.
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Ideas (53) wrote:
  
  This kicks ass, I don't know what else to say
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Twilight (1917) wrote:
  
  o this one was a.w.e.s.o.m.e. the ending everything was priceless. how your not getting feedback i dont know
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (24) wrote:
  
  its because im UNLOVED and miserably emo. haha...the answer: the hell if i know?
  
  
• On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, suicideseason (1906) wrote:
  
  "darkening sugar sweet sin" was great..there were many great phrases,actually.i love the wording of this.and the structure.awesome title,too.-season