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darkness
except for the soft white glow gleaming off pale hands

reflection
eye to eye but boundaries are still to be tainted

sweat
forehead and palms making movement easier

touch
so much is revealed upon a bed with welcoming prospects

nervous
irony is best when naked bodies first meet

necessary
exchange of bodily fluids making lasting connections stable

pleasure
easily wanted always easily given but not easily understood

sex
giving up more than thought possible but regretting nothing



observations during times like these never seem to make sense but sometimes its the observations that last longer than the action at hand.








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On Monday March 15th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:
incredible.me likeylikey as my brother would say.the ending was perfect and true.i really like this,again and again.knight ****


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
"nervous irony is best when naked bodies first meet" thats all i needed for this poem to become just...insanely beautiful. well done.


On Wednesday January 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
if the observation doesn't make any sense then does what was abserved make sense?


On Thursday January 1st, 2004, urbanhumility (1366) writes:
your observance is divine here, well spaced....you have made it all happen here...............urban



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