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A Scar for a Kiss

I rushed to him and fell

down
hard
bleeding

I rushed to him and showed him the wound

red
pain
blood

And with those lovely brown eyes upon me, he took my arm and kissed my wound

faint
heartbeat
love

Time passes, and after his kiss, my wound is nothing more than a mark, a memory, a scar...

I rush to him yet again

fast
needy
blind

And with those lovely brown eyes upon me, he kissed my body and kissed my lips

want
need
desire

Time passes, and after his kiss, all I have left of him is a mark, a memory, a scar...

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On Monday September 24th, 2007, Bluegirl (247) writes:

Enchantingly done. The words are chosen perfectly, I am in love from the first verse.

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, Violet (95) writes:

I'm glad I stumbled across this. I love it.

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, pushblood (37) writes:

My god this is beautiful. The format the words spoken everything about this piece. But the last line left me shaking..Thank You ~P.B~

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

now this one is flawless in all its beauty. each word spoke much more then itself. amazing write...

On Saturday November 15th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

brilliant and beautiful.

On Saturday November 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

You amaze me every time minotaur, keep it up... share your "sickness"

On Thursday November 13th, 2003, Alanarchy (1689) writes:

superbly written. what else is there to say?

On Friday November 14th, 2003, purr_verse (1435) writes:

This is excellent. Form and emotion both extremely well realised. Nice work!

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