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Can You Feel This?

The storm turned away
Running from where
We all may lay
While Angels and crows
Called in sick
Flightless
Wearily quiet
The ground rumbled,
Upset and blistered
The day man found
The day they discovered
Even walls grow tired
Of being built
To be beat down

The sun and the moon,
Now step aside
Leaving stragglers,
Lost within this interim
Of fading shades
While the stars
Who knew the cost
Again,
Sight their tears
For such
Loss

I'm so happy
my poetry has
come back to me

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On Monday May 21st, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (454) writes:

this was so beautiful, and i know how ya feel i get writers block alllllll the time, it drives me insane!! so congrats on that;) and a wonderful poem.

On Sunday April 30th, 2006, Ainsof (1836) writes:

I feel it and it is gorgeous

On Monday April 24th, 2006, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

Damn. The flow in this was awsome. The words themselves astounding. The last three lines thrilling to me because eye heart your writing :D Awsome, awsome. ~Ryan

On Thursday April 6th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (699) writes:

I am so happy to see new pieces from u!These new ones r fantastic!Definitely worth the wait!Ciao,Steve

On Wednesday April 5th, 2006, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

*bows* your way with words has been missed and this poem makes the reason so clear. you speak in such a meaningful way that i can not even think of a worthy complement

On Tuesday April 4th, 2006, Sharon Rose (639) writes:

*is also glad it came back* :) I should leave a wonderfully constructive comment..or at least a wonderfully creative one..but I'm just going to say gorgeous and leave it at that.

On Monday April 3rd, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:

"While Angels and crows Called in sick" felt as if the sky emptied after i read that line

On Monday April 3rd, 2006, antiScripsony (39) writes:

Calmly and pleasantly blunt. You're winner.

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