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Finding A Parallel Shadow

Away with you I sing my grace
While we dance to a happier place

One flew over, and one flew under
I stayed behind, tied to my wonder

Give me your wish, and dance just a bit
Cause together, so lonely and cold we sit

I can’t give you a cause, nor give a dream
But, perhaps, just a peak behind the seam

So just take my hand, and we’ll hide away
We won’t open up, no matter what they say

Away together we’ll sing our grace
While we dance to our happier place

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On Friday December 31st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

such a wonderfull poem,enchanting and delicate,perfectly written

On Monday March 29th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

and may you enjoy your happier grace

On Thursday November 20th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:

"So just take my hand, and we’ll hide away We won’t open up, no matter what they say" beautiful JM. i love it. that line says so much to me.

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

Cre said it perfectly. But maybe I should add that I relate to it, and I think we are trying to hit the same thing in poetry. If we where to use this as the example. Ehem... yes so that makes it realy hard to comment on. I realy enjoyed this. Tiger

On Saturday November 1st, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

a personal wish, well versed, placed perfectly within prose......well done well spoken........

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

Reminds me of being a child again and being carefree and just going with the flow of things while the world rushes around you. Very beautiful and very well written. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

yes this does have a nice flow i like it..good write

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

love? well well u express it on a good way.

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

That's what I was thinking exactly. It flows together so well. Excellent JM.

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

Ohhh I love this! It seems enchanted . . like a spell to be spoken that will accompany you to a better place and time . . like, just close your eyes and be transported . . it imparted some peace to me. Great . .

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